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Forst_Lost
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2022-07-30 23:27

TBH the book was enjoyable but I hate the fact that there are constant schemes going on in the background that make it hard to actually enjoy the main chunk of the story. E.g. the fact that his daughter randomly time travelled back for some unknown reason, his power that makes him believe he is alien, his account getting DELETED from the game HE CREATED-Someone like the MC actually allowing something like that to happen doesn't seem possible unless it is for forced plot. I am sure there are more but this is enough to make my point. It makes the story too much to enjoy when you continuously pile schemes and plans on top of each other, so I will stop here.

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Luffy_For_The_Win
Luffy_For_The_WinLv4

U do know that the creator of games aren’t that good at detecting problems with their own games right. That is the reason for alpha testing and beta testing. That point of “forced plot” as u say is probably the most relatable point about the whole story. Instead of forced I would say the author is hitting too close to home there for game creators liking. This is the same reason that genius hackers once caught by the government are likely to have a chance to drop all charges as long as they work for the cyber security decision. It is a known fact that the creators of software are amazing but the people that break that software are just as genius as the creators if not more so.

Forst_Lost
Forst_LostLv14

Not relevant IMO because what the person targeting him did (besides getting into the software in the first place) is simply delete the account. There is no amazing exploits or bugs to abuse. A person multiple times smarter than the smartest person on the planet can think of a fail safe if his own account is deleted from his own game, ESPECIALLY when he knows he can't create a new one when he is so obsessed with getting stronger.

Luffy_For_The_Win:U do know that the creator of games aren’t that good at detecting problems with their own games right. That is the reason for alpha testing and beta testing. That point of “forced plot” as u say is probably the most relatable point about the whole story. Instead of forced I would say the author is hitting too close to home there for game creators liking. This is the same reason that genius hackers once caught by the government are likely to have a chance to drop all charges as long as they work for the cyber security decision. It is a known fact that the creators of software are amazing but the people that break that software are just as genius as the creators if not more so.
James_carl
James_carlLv3

This novel was the most confusing for me

JESTER_EMPIRE
JESTER_EMPIRELv4

look like you lost the argument luffy for the win

Luffy_For_The_Win:U do know that the creator of games aren’t that good at detecting problems with their own games right. That is the reason for alpha testing and beta testing. That point of “forced plot” as u say is probably the most relatable point about the whole story. Instead of forced I would say the author is hitting too close to home there for game creators liking. This is the same reason that genius hackers once caught by the government are likely to have a chance to drop all charges as long as they work for the cyber security decision. It is a known fact that the creators of software are amazing but the people that break that software are just as genius as the creators if not more so.
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LackyAs
LackyAsLv13

I had to write this review quite freshly and only after 40 something chapters, because I just thought subjective and rash opinion about this book will be more important to some people than future reviews even if they contain 1000 chapters and are written as objectively as possible. It is just that unique of a case where i see Author self harming his story that it is quite weird to wrap my head around. You see, people hate and avoid stories with one diemensional character and simplicity as if they were some kind of stinky trash, and any story where not only MC but lots of side characters including enemies have their own characters and thought processes made for them usually make people like the story more. There is also writing method usually used in the middle of stories or end where perception of said character is turned upside down in plot twists or revealing of unknown facts. You see Author used this method on THREE out of four main characters, but in such way that rather complex personalities with lots of hidden thoughts start to appear as one diemensional ones and to make it worse as an extremely unliked sterotypes. But they are not 😅 AND HE USED IT IN THE VERY BEGINNING. First unlikeable sterotypes is shown to be completely false at chapter 19, second at around chapter 33 and third at chapters 43-45... And all of this false impresion starts in, like, chapter 1. And the problem is, first 15 chapters are often used by people to determine whatever story is good and author capable of making characters feel alive and allow you to immerse in story, after all there are hundreds of srories floating in web and only so much lifespan we have left, who would go and start reading hundred chapters and see if story gets better if there are 50+ stories with nice summaries and maybe even nice beginning 15 chapters. But this story I review here? Beginning 30 chapters felt terrible to read (well purely VR chapters were ok) afterwards chapters were nice. And the only reason I held on is because I wanted to know if my theory was correct - i read NTR 18+ story just one day before and Male MC being in similar position to certain female character... and I wrote my suspicions as two very long paragraph comments. And i found answer by reading so far, but not going to answer here, cause it would be spoiler read the story itself if you wanna know 🤷‍♂️

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