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2022-09-13 14:33

I have not really gone far in this book but I already feel sad that Lucy love brain has a girlfriend when all she wanted was to be his wife aside from the tragedy the story is pretty nice and I could literally feel the emotions of the characters

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I had to write this review quite freshly and only after 40 something chapters, because I just thought subjective and rash opinion about this book will be more important to some people than future reviews even if they contain 1000 chapters and are written as objectively as possible. It is just that unique of a case where i see Author self harming his story that it is quite weird to wrap my head around. You see, people hate and avoid stories with one diemensional character and simplicity as if they were some kind of stinky trash, and any story where not only MC but lots of side characters including enemies have their own characters and thought processes made for them usually make people like the story more. There is also writing method usually used in the middle of stories or end where perception of said character is turned upside down in plot twists or revealing of unknown facts. You see Author used this method on THREE out of four main characters, but in such way that rather complex personalities with lots of hidden thoughts start to appear as one diemensional ones and to make it worse as an extremely unliked sterotypes. But they are not 😅 AND HE USED IT IN THE VERY BEGINNING. First unlikeable sterotypes is shown to be completely false at chapter 19, second at around chapter 33 and third at chapters 43-45... And all of this false impresion starts in, like, chapter 1. And the problem is, first 15 chapters are often used by people to determine whatever story is good and author capable of making characters feel alive and allow you to immerse in story, after all there are hundreds of srories floating in web and only so much lifespan we have left, who would go and start reading hundred chapters and see if story gets better if there are 50+ stories with nice summaries and maybe even nice beginning 15 chapters. But this story I review here? Beginning 30 chapters felt terrible to read (well purely VR chapters were ok) afterwards chapters were nice. And the only reason I held on is because I wanted to know if my theory was correct - i read NTR 18+ story just one day before and Male MC being in similar position to certain female character... and I wrote my suspicions as two very long paragraph comments. And i found answer by reading so far, but not going to answer here, cause it would be spoiler read the story itself if you wanna know 🤷‍♂️

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