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Aoki_Aku
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2022-05-05 06:13

Shameless Author Review. Max has been reincarnated into a world of Mecha and an ongoing Galaxy wide war. He gets off to a rocky start, with a crazy mother, but his fortunes will quickly change once he begins his mandatory education at the Military Academy and the System dormant in his body fully activates. Follow along as he builds himself up into the greatest Mecha Warrior humanity has ever known.

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Lordwlesh
LordwleshLv13

just a selfish request. please try my book in your free time .😀

LordGrimm_XI
LordGrimm_XILv3

Is this harem or One girl romance?

Aoki_Aku
Aoki_AkuAuthor

No romance at all in the early chapters. One girl later.

LordGrimm_XI:Is this harem or One girl romance?
Novaball_9894
Novaball_9894Lv4

Where's the novel cover from?

LordGrimm_XI
LordGrimm_XILv3

Thanks, il read it Then

Aoki_Aku:No romance at all in the early chapters. One girl later.
Lyriker
LyrikerLv14

and with that you have a new reader

Aoki_Aku:No romance at all in the early chapters. One girl later.
azndl550
azndl550Lv14

meh I like harem novels but I like mechs so I'll put on to read when I have time.

Aoki_Aku:No romance at all in the early chapters. One girl later.
_ZypHer_
_ZypHer_Lv10

Matt_pike
Matt_pikeLv5

Would you mind saying how much later like maybe after 100,200,300 chapters and so on?

Aoki_Aku:No romance at all in the early chapters. One girl later.
Aoki_Aku
Aoki_AkuAuthor

There is a short on deployment romantic fling just before chapter 200. The rest will follow a little later.

Matt_pike:Would you mind saying how much later like maybe after 100,200,300 chapters and so on?
Daoist480aPT
Daoist480aPTLv1

Huh, why does it slightly reminds me of Warhammer 40,000

EclipseKnight
EclipseKnightLv4

For real

Daoist480aPT:Huh, why does it slightly reminds me of Warhammer 40,000
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stonedd_4200
stonedd_4200Lv15

its from titanfall 1 or 2, its the kunai pilot

Novaball_9894:Where's the novel cover from?
Marshy_
Marshy_Lv3

And you've got me sold.

Aoki_Aku:No romance at all in the early chapters. One girl later.
Novaball_9894
Novaball_9894Lv4

they changed it the one I was talking about was a previous one, already know it's titanfall art.

stonedd_4200:its from titanfall 1 or 2, its the kunai pilot
Sinful_Cyanide
Sinful_CyanideLv15

Weird that the cover is a woman if romance had little to no impact on a story with a male lead

Aoki_Aku:There is a short on deployment romantic fling just before chapter 200. The rest will follow a little later.
Manhua_Realm
Manhua_RealmLv3

at what chapter does it start please

Aoki_Aku:No romance at all in the early chapters. One girl later.
Tunic01
Tunic01Lv15

Bro there'sike a million harem books...

azndl550:meh I like harem novels but I like mechs so I'll put on to read when I have time.
Lucifero_666
Lucifero_666Lv14

yo author, is that romantic development about the warcrimes enthusiast?

Aoki_Aku:There is a short on deployment romantic fling just before chapter 200. The rest will follow a little later.
Manhua_Realm
Manhua_RealmLv3

add romance tag?

Aoki_Aku:No romance at all in the early chapters. One girl later.
Other Reviews
kennykangaroo2
kennykangaroo2Lv4

I've read up to ch. 600 Initially takes places in the Universe of the Kepler Empire where the MC is reincarnated into the baby of a drug addicted looney mother with amnesia of his previous life that he slowly regains with time. The pacing for the prologue of the story from the mc's birth and until he's graduated the military academy as a crusader mecha pilot leading his own company is lightning fast which is great as nothing gets stale during that section. During his time at the academy he becomes unspoken friends or battle buddies with the female lead due to them being their only rivals and similar A-rank system compatibly. The novel take heavy inspirations from WH40K mecha classifications and design, infantry being fodder, commissars, inquisitors, and emperor. With the WH40K style of military it gives the early engagements with the mc a gritty vibe. From the academy and till now him and the female lead have been through it all together every step of the way with some flirting here and there that now seeing them finally hit 3rd base felt very special. The only negative of this novel is that it's getting boring that the interesting mecha combat and strategizing is being interspersed with 3 dozen chapters of introducing various new tech and socializing with characters you don't need to remember the name of(envoy's aren't even given a name lol how lazy). Once the advent of the colony ship arc the story has taken a steep downturn in effort and it appears that the author has become lazy and greedy, as the recent chapters as of late have been full of useless chatter and dialogue with the purpose of padding out the chapter with otherwise microscopic level of substance. It's take 3 or more chapters to get the same substance of a regular chapter. This author needs to shape up or I'm dropping this novel.

Lomyril
LomyrilLv15

I liked this story... up to a point. If you are interested in mechs, mech battles and upgrades, this is a story you'll definitely like. This story painted the lifestyle so well it almost made me go out and purchase the latest Mechwarrior game out on Steam! The world background makes sense, the character backgrounds are interesting and a bit mysterious, and their progression makes sense and is consistent. The only thing that was off for me was their emotional states. Most of the time, the emotional reactions of the characters are within human norms and are believable. Kids get frustrated with their parents, or are wary about their teachers, or have a love of mechs because they are "cool". It's later on in the story that I have some issues. When a big loss hits our main character, he doesn't seem sad per se. He just stays around to do what he can then moves on to complete his task. There is little to no reflection of him mourning that loss or that loss affecting him emotionally or inhibiting him. Later, he finds what he has lost but there is no sense of real relief from him. It's just another day, it seems, and life goes on. The same thing happens to the other characters around him. They encounter losses but don't really feel the loss. It's almost like they are brainwashed or on drugs. Or it is just a tragic story that happened on the news. It doesn't affect how they live their lives (even though it happened to them or people they knew). So while overall I'd rate the story as a 4, I am dropping reading this story because of the lack of emotional development of the characters. If you don't really care about that sort of thing and love mech stories, it's worth a read.

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