Item: Undying Warlord
Rating: 4
Author: Master_Celestial

Master_CelestialLv42yr

2022-08-23 05:06

The rating is real, but the review is just me complaining, so don’t take it seriously. It‘s a good novel, be it in Writing Quality, Character Design or World background. Still, I dropped it at chapter 10 and I am sure I’m not the only one. The thing is, Mc kills zombies and tries to save a girl then gets shot on and robbed by the survivors who hid themselves. After he killed all the zombies + the girl cuz she turned. The survivors shot him because he is a ‚Murderer‘ even though they know that those guys are zombies…. Yeah. He then got robbed by them, joined them and got all chummy with them. Sure, that is maybe the best rational choice. But it leaves a bad aftertaste and I dropped the novel because of it. I mean, he could just escape from them to the direction of the super market, remove the bullet and recover with his ability. Level up a bit and the come back to take revenge. At least that is what I would have done.

Undying Warlord

HideousGrain

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Liked by 14 people

Replies5

PastlivesLv4

Thanks for the save🗿

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Cheek_Destroyah_87Lv2

that's not the type of mc i like

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XbsXbsLv5

That’s Nothing it just get worse from there I dropped Like 10 ch later when the novel Should have ended. This novel is just poor decisions and plot armor

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Daan_VerliefdeLv3

I do not agree, if you read further you would notice how he takes control of the group and becomes a fair but ruthless leader that will always save his group but would kill or abandon them if they weren’t loyal or broke the rules….

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Khajique_KellyLv2

Emotional men 👄

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