Review Detail of Crazy_Penguin in Start of an Uzumaki Clan - Multiverse
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Yo Crazy Penguin here, since this is my fanfic i have the power to write a 5 star review. Please remember this is my first book please go easy on me. This review is basically to answer some of your question; if you have any.
Start of an Uzumaki Clan - Multiverse
Crazy_Penguin
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Thank you. About the system it’s a status and inventory. Mainly status is for me to keep and let you know track on how strong he is.
Leonardo_Jesus:I like your novel, i'm sad because i hate system and i can tolare naruto having Sharingan, although i would still prefer that he has only Namikaze and Uzumaki traits (Irrelevant because of kyuubi in the end but in the beggining it would be helpful). I just wanna to give feedback to you
I'm by the third chapter and I don't know what to say about his personality I thought you was going to be anti-hero but for me it's more like borderline third-rate villain so I want to know if his attitude going to change or not so I can know so I could drop it but other than that it's actually pretty good
wolfgod223:I'm by the third chapter and I don't know what to say about his personality I thought you was going to be anti-hero but for me it's more like borderline third-rate villain so I want to know if his attitude going to change or not so I can know so I could drop it but other than that it's actually pretty good
Umm… I can only say he will love his harem members and his loyal subordinates. Other than that he doesn’t care about others without getting benefits. He will probably help sometimes is he feels like it. Currently he only cares abou benefits but the special someone will show him love. I am sorry if my definition of anti-hero is different your yours. Mine is like MC only cares about himself and his loved ones. He will kill innocents for power. Not like a sociopath. Hope this answered your question.
wolfgod223:I'm by the third chapter and I don't know what to say about his personality I thought you was going to be anti-hero but for me it's more like borderline third-rate villain so I want to know if his attitude going to change or not so I can know so I could drop it but other than that it's actually pretty good
Crazy_Penguin:Umm… I can only say he will love his harem members and his loyal subordinates. Other than that he doesn’t care about others without getting benefits. He will probably help sometimes is he feels like it. Currently he only cares abou benefits but the special someone will show him love. I am sorry if my definition of anti-hero is different your yours. Mine is like MC only cares about himself and his loved ones. He will kill innocents for power. Not like a sociopath. Hope this answered your question.
No it didn't, remove the tag. You got my hopes up for a good story and i had to read about a senseless slaughter that makes no sense at all.
Crazy_Penguin:Umm… I can only say he will love his harem members and his loyal subordinates. Other than that he doesn’t care about others without getting benefits. He will probably help sometimes is he feels like it. Currently he only cares abou benefits but the special someone will show him love. I am sorry if my definition of anti-hero is different your yours. Mine is like MC only cares about himself and his loved ones. He will kill innocents for power. Not like a sociopath. Hope this answered your question.
There was no senseless slaughter in all chapters.. in just two paragraphs in one chapter. You make it sound like MC is massacring everyone in all chapters. If you don’t like what MC did, you can skip it. I didn’t even go into detail. I just said MC killed everyone who has a lot of chakra on his way to the said destination, even innocents. I don’t even remember writing about killing innocent kids. Sure he killed his age children, but they were hunting him. When wars are happening, do you think everyone is a saint in the Naruto world? So many villages sent kids to war, even Konoha. Did you not like the other parts of the novel? I wrote many chapters and only once I mentioned a slaughter so what about the remaining novel. DId you not enjoy the entire book?
Pythia:No it didn't, remove the tag. You got my hopes up for a good story and i had to read about a senseless slaughter that makes no sense at all.
Nothing will forgive killing innocents. His character has been ruined for the rest of the story from that point on... I swear, some of you people need to get psychological evaluations.
Crazy_Penguin:There was no senseless slaughter in all chapters.. in just two paragraphs in one chapter. You make it sound like MC is massacring everyone in all chapters. If you don’t like what MC did, you can skip it. I didn’t even go into detail. I just said MC killed everyone who has a lot of chakra on his way to the said destination, even innocents. I don’t even remember writing about killing innocent kids. Sure he killed his age children, but they were hunting him. When wars are happening, do you think everyone is a saint in the Naruto world? So many villages sent kids to war, even Konoha. Did you not like the other parts of the novel? I wrote many chapters and only once I mentioned a slaughter so what about the remaining novel. DId you not enjoy the entire book?
bro just make him villian. Anti hero never kill innocent. They sometime do bad things but not bad to the point of killing innocent for fun. They have their own moral code. Yes strong eat weak world. no need moral. if they don't have bottomline that world is no different from animal.
Crazy_Penguin:Umm… I can only say he will love his harem members and his loyal subordinates. Other than that he doesn’t care about others without getting benefits. He will probably help sometimes is he feels like it. Currently he only cares abou benefits but the special someone will show him love. I am sorry if my definition of anti-hero is different your yours. Mine is like MC only cares about himself and his loved ones. He will kill innocents for power. Not like a sociopath. Hope this answered your question.
Enjoyed the read so far, thanks! It understandable people just have different opinions what villains and anti heroes are, you cannot cater to everyone just go off how you see it.
Crazy_Penguin:There was no senseless slaughter in all chapters.. in just two paragraphs in one chapter. You make it sound like MC is massacring everyone in all chapters. If you don’t like what MC did, you can skip it. I didn’t even go into detail. I just said MC killed everyone who has a lot of chakra on his way to the said destination, even innocents. I don’t even remember writing about killing innocent kids. Sure he killed his age children, but they were hunting him. When wars are happening, do you think everyone is a saint in the Naruto world? So many villages sent kids to war, even Konoha. Did you not like the other parts of the novel? I wrote many chapters and only once I mentioned a slaughter so what about the remaining novel. DId you not enjoy the entire book?
Bapabooey:Currently on the 10th chapter, haven't found anything to complain about too much. I haven't noticed if you have an auxiliary chapter for it or not, but do you have the list of the harem members from Naruto? Maybe as you progress make another auxiliary chapter for the members from other universes?
Crazy_Penguin:No it was a mistake. That cover was supposed to be used for my new rough book… 😅
