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BreathOfSin
BreathOfSinLv132yr
2022-05-03 21:51

Writing quality is p good, there are mistakes but they are small and you can just ignore em. stability is great, for now atleast. Although story development is good, I wished MC being quirkless, alas, he got whitebeard's tremor power. Character development is great, MC is playing his part as heavenly demon. About the world background, MC is in musutafu city and met momo, don't know anything else. Changed to 5 stars as author asked me to (previously rated 4 stars cause I wanted MC to be quirkless).

MHA: Heavenly Demon (Reboot)

Holy_Chad
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GawkGawk
GawkGawkLv3

quirkless stories are annoying cause they can't explain any powers they get later on in the story. And for the most part they usually get some superpower or power up.

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BreathOfSin
BreathOfSinLv13

The thing is, quirkless would be good as author added martial arts and Chi, which would be something akin to a quirk but not at the same time.

GawkGawk:quirkless stories are annoying cause they can't explain any powers they get later on in the story. And for the most part they usually get some superpower or power up.
2yr
Urich
UrichLv4

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BreathOfSin:The thing is, quirkless would be good as author added martial arts and Chi, which would be something akin to a quirk but not at the same time.
2yr
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HypCof_gaming
HypCof_gamingLv14

to be honest I thought the mc gonna be like doflamingo because of the title .................................................................

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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

The writing is average, not bad but clearly not good. The story had potential, but the moment the MC woke up a quirck OP the fanfic got boring. It would have been interesting to see the MC start from the bottom and establish the sect from scratch by training Quirckless or people without a heroic Quirck like Shinso and Toga, maybe even creating an underworld organization instead of becoming a hero. Unfortunately the fanfic is following the standard MHA route where the MC has a cheat and becomes a UA OP student, entitled to meet momo child to cultivate waifu early.

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Thomas_Ederson
Thomas_EdersonLv13

To be honest this really surprised me. I thought it was just gonna be another sh**ty MHA fanatic, but it's actually good. I really hope the author can get back onto it coz it could really turn out to be diamond in the rough.

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