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Hisoka_OeLv131yr
2024-01-04 06:29

This story was very promising in the beginning. I really liked the MC and ML. They were both awkward with each other for different reasons. she because she just entered her host and he was married to her due to unfortunate circumstances. Also, the original host didn't like him. The romance was nice, if non-existent for the most part. I liked this because they were getting to know each other as individuals before they were thinking about each other in terms of husband and wife. It's a very slow burn. The family members were very vibrant and unique, even if a little frustrating at time. Especially, the ML's father and the extended family. They really had me gritting my teeth. The MC family were not far behind in annoyance. Sure, her family sometimes came off as cliche in their actions but you could see the logic in their actions. like you knew what was motivating them to act that way. They weren't doing it for plot sake but because that was what was driving the character. But then the mass released happened last month as the quality went super down, on so many aspects that it feels like it's not the same author.For one, the translation is bad. And I mean in comparison to the first chapters. In the beginning, there were like two or three errors in every five or so chapters. They were spread out and not usually in the same one. Now the errors are on every chapter. The pronouns keep switching and the names of some characters, too. What made me drop the novel though was the new writing style. it doesn't feel the same. it feels too one dimensional, like it was written via AI. Just flat. No personality or depth to the new characters. And even the MC and ML feel weird. I can't truly explain it. But this is it for me.

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I dropped at chapter 5 due to following reasons 1 regular questions that are answered in 1st chapter aren't (character ages, what profession did she have in previous life, what was her family situation, what type of world was she from, what century from, what is her personality type -which can be understood based upon reaction etc from Reincarnating but no reaction to dying and living in another body/world) (what caused reincarnation) 2 she has a superpower the description of which was extremely bad, and wood DOESN'T create water also removes any form of "Brilliance" MC could have through the use of modern knowledge example - improving plants could use irrigation techniques, compost, spacing between plants making makeshift shelters to keep plants from cold or wind. do any of that no I'll just stick my hand on it sending a mystical power without explanation and speed up the rate of growth to immediate (not grown anything so far except speed up a fruit tree but obvious what will happen ) 3 in chapter 2 info dump of her new family of in-laws leaves 0 impression on readers so they will have 0 clue of who is who I made sense of only half even though read it 3 times 3b. inconsistent with members of said family, the husbands father has 3 children her husband is the 3rd son within a few paragraphs it becomes 7children, one of the sons being 13 4 no mention of MCs age from previous life, or current life or age of any characters this should be mentioned within couple paragraphs these seemingly insignificant issues are what build a connection with the reader allowing them to get at least emotionally invested in a character as they haven't been done or even thought of readers have 0 forms of connection and end up feeling like it is bothersome this is issues I've seen within 5 chapters not enough to give accurate review so that's why 3 stars

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