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2022-04-29 17:07

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]Description is good. Can't wait to read the novel hope it gets picked.

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I dropped at chapter 5 due to following reasons 1 regular questions that are answered in 1st chapter aren't (character ages, what profession did she have in previous life, what was her family situation, what type of world was she from, what century from, what is her personality type -which can be understood based upon reaction etc from Reincarnating but no reaction to dying and living in another body/world) (what caused reincarnation) 2 she has a superpower the description of which was extremely bad, and wood DOESN'T create water also removes any form of "Brilliance" MC could have through the use of modern knowledge example - improving plants could use irrigation techniques, compost, spacing between plants making makeshift shelters to keep plants from cold or wind. do any of that no I'll just stick my hand on it sending a mystical power without explanation and speed up the rate of growth to immediate (not grown anything so far except speed up a fruit tree but obvious what will happen ) 3 in chapter 2 info dump of her new family of in-laws leaves 0 impression on readers so they will have 0 clue of who is who I made sense of only half even though read it 3 times 3b. inconsistent with members of said family, the husbands father has 3 children her husband is the 3rd son within a few paragraphs it becomes 7children, one of the sons being 13 4 no mention of MCs age from previous life, or current life or age of any characters this should be mentioned within couple paragraphs these seemingly insignificant issues are what build a connection with the reader allowing them to get at least emotionally invested in a character as they haven't been done or even thought of readers have 0 forms of connection and end up feeling like it is bothersome this is issues I've seen within 5 chapters not enough to give accurate review so that's why 3 stars

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