Punctuations. PLEASE USE PUNCTUATIONS. Your way of writing is so f*cked up that it makes me want to leave it the moment I see a WHOLE paragraph with no dots. Not to mention, the script style. Are you making a story or a movie script? Not only it's lazy, it's basically not even a novel anymore. And here I thought you could make better stories if you are bashing and mocking other people's works. Usually, I'll point out things that need to be fixed in a review, but this work is not even reviewable anymore.
Cheesy_Dogs
Liked it!
LIKECheesy_Dogs:And also so many people do the exact same style so why don’ you go leave a low review on all those stories also
Cheesy_Dogs:And also so many people do the exact same style so why don’ you go leave a low review on all those stories also
Fun fact: Webnovel has a profanity filter. Simply speaking, Anything you wrote will be filtered and any "curse words" like the F word, N word, and others will likely be deleted by the mod and no one could see it other than you (it appears on your activity, but it will not be shown to someone, the book, or the paragraph you commented). In other words; if you actually think everything I said is just..."B*tching" like YOU. Then you're probably just a kid acting tough by cursing in your comments. I thought I can have an actual discussion. What a disappointment.
So I forces people to give me powerstones huh... I don't even have a patreon. You're going to make me cry there...
Door_kun:"The only review" huh? I see you've forgotten about me.
Shall I remind you then? You were complaining out of frustration because the plot you wished to come out didn't come out. And put a one-star on everything, completely forgetting the fact that it has nothing to do with; Writing Quality, Stability of Updates, Story Development, Character Design, and World Background. Well, I've been looking at your pathetic review since, thinking if it was actually my fault to make a bad story. but the conclusion is no. It's not that I made a bad story. But you're just a horrible person. You made me worry for nothing.
Cheesy_Dogs:Ya because your story was so bad I forgot about it.