Ibakedmypotatoes

Now I am not someone who is supposed to judge other people's paths of Dao. But your username has the same frequency as your comments.

Turn Null, is origin skill. Azathoth is ultimate. and Turn null is Azathoth's subskill. You like tweaking the canon so much then fine, it's a fanfic anyway. I won't judge. (Judging you silently)

You know... that's a really vague explanation. Here's a plausible explanation: it's a fanfic. Ima stop asking.

Fun fact: Webnovel has a profanity filter. Simply speaking, Anything you wrote will be filtered and any "curse words" like the F word, N word, and others will likely be deleted by the mod and no one could see it other than you (it appears on your activity, but it will not be shown to someone, the book, or the paragraph you commented). In other words; if you actually think everything I said is just..."B*tching" like YOU. Then you're probably just a kid acting tough by cursing in your comments. I thought I can have an actual discussion. What a disappointment.

PS: To "fix" this fanfic, you can start by adding dots and the end of every sentence you wrote

In addition, all people who use script style would at least use punctuations correctly. If you want to post something like this, post it on Wattpad. None will judge you there. I know a few script-style works in Wattpad that actually readable. Even if his work is script-styled, not only does he pays attention to his grammar, but he also uses punctuations correctly. And not only that, he wrote narrations rather than leaving the conversation untouched. He told us the facial expressions of a character every time that character talked or acted. If you're going to complain about my review then at least stop reviewing a one-star on works you hated while spamming curses as a review. And if you don't want anyone to judge you, GO TO F*CKING WATTPAD.

Bruh. I would if I came across them. This is a new account.

No

Punctuations. PLEASE USE PUNCTUATIONS. Your way of writing is so f*cked up that it makes me want to leave it the moment I see a WHOLE paragraph with no dots. Not to mention, the script style. Are you making a story or a movie script? Not only it's lazy, it's basically not even a novel anymore. And here I thought you could make better stories if you are bashing and mocking other people's works. Usually, I'll point out things that need to be fixed in a review, but this work is not even reviewable anymore.