First, like the cover and synopsis, it probably pulls a lot of readers. It's kinda fasted paced with lots of description and I am down for that. The character background is well set up and everything is good. what the author could improve on is.... dialogues, they all sound pretty much the same (until where I read) I am sure it improved on the lateral chapter. other than that loved it, keep writing author! ;p
Rainbowprincess
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