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little_howii
little_howiiLv23yr
2022-04-18 17:16

I'm really happy you picked this up🙌, don't be discouraged and keep writing! I hope your own work is better than the original, though. It has longer chapters with fewer grammar mistakes, which is why I’m holding this story up higher than others. Though I wish you’d have rewritten it; everything is just working out too well and too easily for Harry. 5 million gold dragons, a hoard of previously undiscovered mines, unknown-secret-Stark-treasure, canal-creating-earthquakes, unstoppable-loyal-metamorph-assassins, etc. Harry’s already a powerful wizard, he doesn’t really need all that plot armor, or at least not all at once. My advice, more character development and ease up on the ‘sucking-up’. We know he’s great, it’s a little too overworked when repeated over and over just how much. Once in a while, more subtlety, is enough. Also, the chapters with POVs, other than Aryan’s, are the best in my opinion! You’ve showed us what he’s done for the North; more chapters with a bunch of different POVs in each chapter from different lords, heirs/heiresses, and smallfolk will expand the story and make it seem fuller. Cersei, Manderley, Robb, Jon, random northmen, etc. Can’t wait to read your work!

Game of Thrones : The Northern Realms

ElderKwon
4.6
47 Chs

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Desertstorm
DesertstormLv3

Can't bring myself to read this 😂 Harry Potter and game of thrones....

3yr
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Newnoob
NewnoobLv4

Agreed. Sometimes POV's change the whole perspective of a fic.

3yr
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Newnoob
NewnoobLv4

We'll try reading 'HP transmigrated into Domeric Bolton'. The best HPxGOT fic in this site.

Desertstorm:Can't bring myself to read this 😂 Harry Potter and game of thrones....
2yr
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Desertstorm
DesertstormLv3

Yeah I'm caught up with the novel so far. I was expecting it to be bar I can't lie but it's was surprising good so far. As for the Bolton fanfic I did read that awhile back and was pretty good.

Newnoob:We'll try reading 'HP transmigrated into Domeric Bolton'. The best HPxGOT fic in this site.
2yr
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Newnoob
NewnoobLv4

Man I finished it a long time ago. At that time I was GOT fanatic, and I somehow stumbled upon this fic. Read the whole lot of it within 24 hours, and tbh was disappointed when it was dropped. It's good that you're taking this up yourself. Takes a lot of courage. Hope you do justice to the original and please don't drop. Don't leave the work unfinished.

3yr

Kingasura
KingasuraLv14

I'm happy that someone picked this up as I really liked the OG fanfic and was very sad when it was dropped. I can't wait to see what you do with it.

3yr
TruthExposer123
TruthExposer123Lv4

i think i've seen this fanfiction somewhere in the Fanfiction.com but it just got deleted or something but thank you for picking this up :D ..........................

3yr
Jamie_Clarke_4041
Jamie_Clarke_4041Lv1

It's just disappointing, to be honest, and is an incredibly stale read. Character development and story development do not feel natural but forced. The quality of writing isn't good enough; the story is basically 'character x says this. Character y is uncertain about this. Character z supports character x. Character y decides it is not a bad idea. Character x then revolutionises his whole kingdom and becomes a superpower.' It doesn't make much sense at all and the attempt to combine GOT and HP is laughable. Within 4 chapters the MC conveniently finds a huge stash of gold which is never mentioned in any iterations of GOT and then it is just brushed over as if that is a normal occurrence. In conclusion, if you want to read an actually good novel, ignore this. If you're up with a meh read that will very mildly satisfy you, feel free to try, but don't say I didn't warn you.

2yr
Hit1903
Hit1903Lv4

Dude, why are you reincarnating Gabrielle?? Even without her, the story could be good. there is also the problem with how the dialogues are spoken. They come as too straightforward. If you had spent some time, you could have made this better

3yr
Maizuky_Nichan
Maizuky_NichanLv14

Amazing story so far, I hope you keep up the great work Author-sama.⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀

3yr
Tales_de_Mileto
Tales_de_MiletoLv1

I think it would be better if you made changes to Catelyn's character from much earlier than from where you originally started. As it is the bashing you are throwing at her, doesn't make sense by canon reasoning nor by this story reasoning. While you clearly don't like her, and so the writing starts to conflict.

2yr
Lucky_Rob
Lucky_RobLv2

I'm happy someone picked this story and continues it. I'm hoping for a harem tho. Gabriela for the north, Daenerys for the middle and Arienne for the south. Thanks again for bringing this story back!

3yr
Mohammad_Meraz
Mohammad_MerazLv3

please man i am begging you.do not drop this.

1yr
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