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crazyspecter
crazyspecterLv142yr
2022-07-05 15:40

I make sure to avoid putting 5 stars for 1 reason: the story needs to reach more chapters when you reach at least 50 chapters published I will put a 5 star review ...until then there is the fear that it will be dropped. onto the story: the slow updates make sure that the chapter are not too short and they are of good quality...it is still the beginning of the story but after a few initials doubts, I feel like this work deserve a review even though there are only 12 published chapters. The world background is obviously Hp but the author is already showing to be capable to add more elements in it that fit very well and in a way that won't stop him both to follow canon or alter it based on his plans. the mc is being flashed out very well and tbh the only thing beeded is to await more chapter to see the story develop. I am eafer to read more and I have a lot of expectations for this work

The Will of Gil (Gilderoy Lockhart SI)

DragonField
4.2
122 Chs

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Enlightened_Clown
Enlightened_ClownLv4

he reached 50

1yr
ArslanII
ArslanIILv2

It reached 55 chapters

1yr
crazyspecter
crazyspecterLv14

in fact I am doing another 5 star review lol

1yr
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Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

I had high expectations but it turned out to be a disappointment. After the first chapter the story became a boring internal monologue and unnecessary information dump.

2yr

OukisLips
OukisLipsLv15

This story is just nothing but monologuing and info dumps. After 16 chapters there's still no plot to speak of, and the MC is sorta an idiot.

2yr
Peyton_Laley
Peyton_LaleyLv15

it could have have a good book but everything in it was bad. the story was all over the place. the character didn't ever stay consistent. it all just went straight to garbage

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Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6

Btw. Good start. I like fanfic with si as lockhart. Lets see what happens...... ....................m.........mmm..............................m.........mmm..........

2yr
DaoistGHlMwP
DaoistGHlMwPLv1

It is a great thing that you took time to build your character and his achievements, rather than rush everything at once. Hope to see more from this great story.

2yr
Cha0sTheory
Cha0sTheoryLv15

Reveal spoiler

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Wise_AF
Wise_AFLv3

Not good, dropped after 17th chapter. MC's character bounces between annoying, incompetent and boring. Nothing to say about frequency of updates, neither positive or negative. Author spends way too much time describing unimportant drivel, if whole story will be written in such manner, it will take well over 1mil words to write down equivalent of 1 Harry Potter year. While I'm personally unimpressed and bored, if you enjoy this story, great for you and best of luck with future updates.

1yr
Great_Abby
Great_AbbyLv3

Awesome story, can't wait till he starts teaching at Hogwarts!

2yr
Skaviouz
SkaviouzLv14

I remember reading this a few months back, I did some binge reading to catch back up. Must say, I feel that the quality of the writing is great, better than my memory had, maybe it was mixed with the other Gill Lockhart HP Fanfic from months ago? actually, probably... Anyways, this is a great read nonetheless as I just started back from the beginning in my binge read. Also, I checked and the author has a stable schedule for new chapters, which speaks volume not only for quality, but the discipline the author has for this great story to see it to the end.

1yr
CrevelZardick
CrevelZardickLv1

Can't wait for more~!

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