Review Detail of RubyEyedSkull in Harry Potter: Red Weasley The Strange Red Wizard

Few grammatical that are not insurmontable, you can read the story extremely well. The real problem I have with the story is the MC. The first chapters are good up until he goes to Hogwarts. Due to his auras being always active people are convinced he's a monster (mind you only the B-tier characters, all the major characters are immune) and even though the MC is constantly lonely and feel ostracized he doesn't do anything about him even when teenagers he's never met call him (a 11 year old) a monster. He also is very critical of Ron for his boorish behaviour and him thinking the MC is some kind of monster but then the MC spends several chapters torturing Hermione, his best friend, making her think she's loosing her mind just to have fun. You can't be sad about people not giving you a chance and immediately assuming you're a psycopath because of something out of your control and then behave like a psycopath. I've got nothing against evil MCs, I kinda enjoy them but Red is not portrayed as an evil MC but a hero. He acts all high and mighty and is friend constantly defend him because 'stupid people judge him to quickly' but he's a real creep. You can't take the moral high ground against people for their behaviour and then be even worse. Ron is the real GOAT of this story for seeing his brother for what he truly is. Yes he's brash, doesn't always think things through and goes of the handle real quick but he's a kid.