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Delta_4
Delta_4Lv152yr
2022-04-13 05:43

great story all that needs done is an English speaker go through and fix the Grammer errors like the pronouns because mtl's from Spanish to English don't work all that well

Harry Potter: Red Weasley The Strange Red Wizard

Emanuel_Alegre
3.2
244 Chs

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Yue_021
Yue_021Lv14

The start was nice and interesting. The childhood, his relationship with his family, then the house he was sorted into, I liked them all. Though... I did not really understand his insistence to changing his name... he sounded like a bratty kid for soemone who reincarnated, but other than that his personality was interesting to read. But the thing that ruined it for me was the large harem especially specially since it is in a Harry Potter World..... it would have been better if the author limited to 2-5 fl and allowed each fl to have proper development and screentime.

2yr

Immortal_Cat
Immortal_CatLv13

this book is great, but there're a lot of grammatical errors. you would need to be a practioner of the dao of translation, obtained by reading lots and lots of tashy translated chinese manhuas and novels.

2yr
Laziness_IsThe_Key
Laziness_IsThe_KeyLv5

Really hard to read Brain cells just cant keep up Grammer is really bad couldn't read pass chap 5 Mc's character is meh wants to change his name to Red💁🏻‍♂️

2yr
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

I only read up to the part where MC sits in Hermione's cabin on the train but thats as far as I needed. The MC has the emotional range of a brick if he isn't talking to what I'm going to assume are future harem members(Luna, Ginny, Hermione so far) After checking the Harem Quiz and saw a unicorn was a viable and voted for option I decided against further reading. You might be thinking "Red Weasley" is a kind of nickname or epitaph but it isn't. The MC threw a huge fit over his name "Nicholas Leopold Weasley" and wanted something edgy and unique and after a long process had his name legally and magically changed to Red. His three wishes were unique and interesting and I rather enjoyed the aura/essence and the mini skills as a pseudo-gamer ability without levels and stats but the blood magic apparently changed MC enough that he has hair the color of wet blood, and red eyes. Naturally such a character should have the name Red. If I could give less than 1 star for character design I absolutely would. Some good parts of the story, so you and others don't feel like there was nothing good, were the merchant. I liked the idea of it and how it was handled with getting stock to where the sold products were sent. Luna being Luna and being able to pry some emotions out of the brick was fitting and their interactions with her parents was nice. Author I get you had your own reasons for wanting his name to be Red but I feel like it could have been handled better in the story than just spazzing out over it like he did.

2yr
crinix
crinixLv13

The first ten were good...i enjoyed it alot...then when the Hogwarts arc start it went down the spirals...everything that was established in first 10 chapters was discarded and MC personality did a 180° turn...in first 10 chapters he was a quiet and expressionless kid and then at Hogwarts he became a outgoing, manipulative,playboy and someone who want to watch the world burn....like he got to chose which house he wanted and he chose Slytherin because he just want to spite people... it's a huge turn down for me(it's my personal opinion).

2yr
tentalagim
tentalagimLv4

Just a warning. Eventually the adult mc blackmail's 11 year old Pansy and sexually assaults and r###s her regularly. Weird direction to go. It started well, interesting mc, quickly goes down hill.

2yr
GotaDeAgua
GotaDeAguaLv4

Following your story I would understand and accept the death of some important characters such as Ron and Harry, since you decided to have a very bad start with Hermione. Now, you are not aware that each interaction with the main characters generates a change for the story in general. I know that the personality is not definitive and evolves to adapt, and I cannot accept in my mind the evolution so fierce in the last 10 chapters of your novel. Not to mention that he considers adding Harem into the story which is not personally suitable for Harry Potter.

2yr
Truck_San
Truck_SanLv14

Although hard to read because of the grammar, the story itself is very interesting, personally I like the MC. But author is there a Spanish version of the story cause I’d like to read it without that many, if not then that is totally fine. Anyways, I really like your story. Keep it up author 👍🏼.

2yr
MaggotTrese
MaggotTreseLv1

Read this if you want to be annoyed and hate the MC in 1st chapter. My remaining few brain cells can't handle the stupidity of the MC, heck he is more stupid than Ron.

2yr
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