this book is great, but there're a lot of grammatical errors. you would need to be a practioner of the dao of translation, obtained by reading lots and lots of tashy translated chinese manhuas and novels.

Really hard to read Brain cells just cant keep up Grammer is really bad couldn't read pass chap 5 Mc's character is meh wants to change his name to Red💁🏻‍♂️

I only read up to the part where MC sits in Hermione's cabin on the train but thats as far as I needed. The MC has the emotional range of a brick if he isn't talking to what I'm going to assume are future harem members(Luna, Ginny, Hermione so far) After checking the Harem Quiz and saw a unicorn was a viable and voted for option I decided against further reading. You might be thinking "Red Weasley" is a kind of nickname or epitaph but it isn't. The MC threw a huge fit over his name "Nicholas Leopold Weasley" and wanted something edgy and unique and after a long process had his name legally and magically changed to Red. His three wishes were unique and interesting and I rather enjoyed the aura/essence and the mini skills as a pseudo-gamer ability without levels and stats but the blood magic apparently changed MC enough that he has hair the color of wet blood, and red eyes. Naturally such a character should have the name Red. If I could give less than 1 star for character design I absolutely would. Some good parts of the story, so you and others don't feel like there was nothing good, were the merchant. I liked the idea of it and how it was handled with getting stock to where the sold products were sent. Luna being Luna and being able to pry some emotions out of the brick was fitting and their interactions with her parents was nice. Author I get you had your own reasons for wanting his name to be Red but I feel like it could have been handled better in the story than just spazzing out over it like he did.

The first ten were good...i enjoyed it alot...then when the Hogwarts arc start it went down the spirals...everything that was established in first 10 chapters was discarded and MC personality did a 180° turn...in first 10 chapters he was a quiet and expressionless kid and then at Hogwarts he became a outgoing, manipulative,playboy and someone who want to watch the world burn....like he got to chose which house he wanted and he chose Slytherin because he just want to spite people... it's a huge turn down for me(it's my personal opinion).

Just a warning. Eventually the adult mc blackmail's 11 year old Pansy and sexually assaults and r###s her regularly. Weird direction to go. It started well, interesting mc, quickly goes down hill.

Following your story I would understand and accept the death of some important characters such as Ron and Harry, since you decided to have a very bad start with Hermione. Now, you are not aware that each interaction with the main characters generates a change for the story in general. I know that the personality is not definitive and evolves to adapt, and I cannot accept in my mind the evolution so fierce in the last 10 chapters of your novel. Not to mention that he considers adding Harem into the story which is not personally suitable for Harry Potter.

Although hard to read because of the grammar, the story itself is very interesting, personally I like the MC. But author is there a Spanish version of the story cause I’d like to read it without that many, if not then that is totally fine. Anyways, I really like your story. Keep it up author 👍🏼.

Read this if you want to be annoyed and hate the MC in 1st chapter. My remaining few brain cells can't handle the stupidity of the MC, heck he is more stupid than Ron.

great story all that needs done is an English speaker go through and fix the Grammer errors like the pronouns because mtl's from Spanish to English don't work all that well