Author here! This is technically my third book and im definitely not getting any better. This is just something im casually writing, I can confirm there are 114 chapters! Extremely slow moving Story, because I want it to be :D Thanks if you do read it and I appreciate it.

Really good work. No op system, no stupid mc and no faceslapping. The things I mentioned are in nearly every book on this app, but not in this one. Wich is like: finally a normal mc without the chinise bulsh. Just 1 thing I would complain about is: What happened to the mcs concubine? Because after they get together author doesnt mentions her anymore or do they have children now? Because they are alredy together for couple years. And author if you read this: there is no chapter 2. I think you copied chapter 1 by mistake and used it as chapter 2. Keep up the good work 👍

Loving the book ! Cool family development/clan mix I read your last one and I’ glad there is a new one coming out! And finally consistent updates with occasional bursts of posts !

I really love this the clan building is so good and we really don’ get a lot of clan buliding books plus the mc is actually smart and knows what to do to develop his famialy and this has good pacing

Really when I saw the title it caught my attention, but even more so when I saw its rating. Unfortunately I am disappointed. The story is insipid, you don't feel any connection with the main character and the time jumps are overused, the battles are hardly felt, as far as the harem meh, if each one is useful in their own way, but they are so forgettable that I don't even know who is who anymore, after having paused the story for a couple of days. The system is perhaps the most redeemable since it is its point of originality, but it loses that potential with the way you narrate the story, although it is valid that it is in the third person, but you turn it into a series of mechanized events. Also why did you have to add the setting to your lucky looting system? ("Where they hunt the protagonist"), there was no need if your system was to create war dogs and not the other, for that I better read novels of the villain of destiny. The world background, at first, is interesting, but then it fades and I emphasize that it is due to the abuse of time jumps, which as a result only knows the organization of the protagonist as for the rest, it only leaves a vague idea. Well, and I have among others... now it's worth reading, it depends on the type of development you want, if you just like a story with bombardments of sometimes unnecessary information, well this novel is your thing, but if you want to connect with the story in yes, better turn around that this feels one-dimensional. Finally, author you have good ideas, but you have executed it poorly, in my honest opinion it would be best if you rewrite the story, because to be honest your story feels more like a school textbook than a novel itself.

This... is a masterpiece, I really don't know what to say... like this book is completely new to me I haven't seen anything like this before and I don't think I'll see something comparable to this in a very, very long time...I'd personally like to thank the Author for writing such an amazing book, Even though my opinion matters that much it still counts, So Thank you Author!

I like the story ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, , , , , , , , , ,, , , , ,, , , , , , , , ,, , , , ,, , , , , , , , , , , , , ,, , , , , , , ,, , , , good potential!

I want moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ( I came because I said you gonna upload more )😀

Slow paced but good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍