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victoralr
victoralrAuthor1yrvictoralr

Mandatory 5 star review. It's my first time writing a story and I hope you like it. Please share with friends if you like it. ;););););););)

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I became a legion lich

victoralr

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Pragmatico
PragmaticoLv15Pragmatico

I can’t give your story a proper review since I could not read past chapter 2. Please fix the grammar so I can try again.

Abd_Alrahman
Abd_AlrahmanLv11Abd_Alrahman

what if you dont have friends?

victoralr
victoralrAuthorvictoralr

In this case, we are two.

Abd_Alrahman:what if you dont have friends?
RainbowBeheader
RainbowBeheaderLv13RainbowBeheader

harem?

victoralr:In this case, we are two.
victoralr
victoralrAuthorvictoralr

Nope

RainbowBeheader:harem?
MILARCH
MILARCHLv13MILARCH

can i know something about the mc's character? thank you.

victoralr
victoralrAuthorvictoralr

Crazy, reckless, serial-killer, with a bit of mad scientist.

MILARCH:can i know something about the mc's character? thank you.
ILovemyself_84
ILovemyself_84Lv4ILovemyself_84

Romance?

victoralr:Nope
victoralr
victoralrAuthorvictoralr

Nope. It is nearly impossible for him to truly fall in love with anyone, although Athos can bond with someone from time to time.

ILovemyself_84:Romance?
ILovemyself_84
ILovemyself_84Lv4ILovemyself_84

Ok thank u ☺️

victoralr:Nope. It is nearly impossible for him to truly fall in love with anyone, although Athos can bond with someone from time to time.
trol_reaper
trol_reaperLv13trol_reaper

a promising book indeed

Javon_Nixon
Javon_NixonLv14Javon_Nixon

Will he be an eternal virgin?

victoralr:Nope. It is nearly impossible for him to truly fall in love with anyone, although Athos can bond with someone from time to time.
victoralr
victoralrAuthorvictoralr

No

Javon_Nixon:Will he be an eternal virgin?
Herr_Ungewiss
Herr_UngewissLv11Herr_Ungewiss

Will the grama improve? After the first 17 chapters it seems like its getting worse :/

DrGrace
DrGraceLv14DrGrace

Well he be an eternal villain? Or will he become a good person or at least an anti hero as the story progresses?

victoralr
victoralrAuthorvictoralr

He is and will remain a villain.

DrGrace:Well he be an eternal villain? Or will he become a good person or at least an anti hero as the story progresses?
DrGrace
DrGraceLv14DrGrace

Oh, thank you for answering.

victoralr:He is and will remain a villain.
NecroFan
NecroFanLv3NecroFan

Hey. Just a heads up I suggest you start caring for your community. I’ve noticed you seldom respond to chapter comments or reviews and I think you should. Solid book but to me it looks like your ignoring spelling errors or critism. Please look at them and go back to edit a little bit. Promising book so far.

NecroFan
NecroFanLv3NecroFan

Listen man, you have a great novel and great ideas but you NEED to go back and fix errors. Many people just drop this because of the ”he her” mix up. I’v highlited a few and will continue to for you. Please fix em.

Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv13Romance_guy

Romance?

victoralr:Nope
The_Last_Native
The_Last_NativeLv15The_Last_Native

Dub

victoralr:Nope