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The_Last_Native3dCommentedCh 45 Broken! Mana Singularity is too broken! Part-2.- The_Last_Native3dPosted
I'm impressed by the strong start and the portrayal of a protagonist who isn't weak-minded. The misunderstandings about his power remind me of "I'm not the demon god's lackey," and there's a similar vibe to "undercover professor," both of which are excellent reads. While this book fills a gap, I find myself enjoying it even more. However, refining the grammar flow and offering better insight into the perspectives and thoughts of other characters could enhance the storytelling. Overall, it's a great story.
- The_Last_Native1mthCommented"It can only be him."
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Hope she becomes the female lead.
A ripple of awe and disbelief echoed through the stadium. The Divine Sorceress herself, Aurelia Draxen, The number 1 hero was here seen in public. - The_Last_Native3mthReplied to Roseiinthegarden
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- The_Last_Native3mthCommentedWell, let's leave the main dramas to resolve this confusion with their traditional dose of heroism and recklessness. After all, what could go wrong? (If you heard thunder in the background, it was pure coincidence.)
- The_Last_Native3mthReplied to kxixrxixtxo
Nowadays, kids are running around saying cringe-worthy things like "San kun," and I can't even stand to read those words. Despite that, I persevered, finding satisfaction in the novel's development. Ultimately, I chose to delete it, as the story didn't deserve a small negative comment.
"Alright, Emmie! Time for your first delivery! Here take the key!" - The_Last_Native3mthReplied to kxixrxixtxo
Good
"Alright, Emmie! Time for your first delivery! Here take the key!" - The_Last_Native3mthCommented
Oh, here comes the introduction of an irritating and intrusive female character in the story.
"Alright, Emmie! Time for your first delivery! Here take the key!" - The_Last_Native3mthCommentedVampires didn't fight in the war, but they sure enjoyed watching it.
- The_Last_Native3mthCommentedAfter reading the Chaos Training Grounds information, he recalled what he asked about with the Goddess of Night... If he could bring more people to the Chaos Training Grounds, and he received a positive reply, though he needed to use to the person he wanted to bring the Unique Skill: Chaos Buff (EX) he received.
- The_Last_Native3mthCommented
Hope she is the female lead.
"She" looked at the face of the mortal, Russell Moon, whose head was sitting on "Her" lap as "She" sat on the ground. A faint smile was painted on her beautiful lips. - The_Last_Native3mthPosted
Initially, I thought this could be an excellent novel, akin to "I'm not the demon god's lackey." However, the concept lost its appeal for me when the main character started world-hopping. It disrupted my reading enjoyment as I was just beginning to grasp the details of the initial world. Suddenly shifting to a frozen world felt jarring, and I believe the narrative would have been more engaging by focusing on a single world as readers were forming a mental image of the surroundings. Personally, I find world-hopping less enjoyable to read, but that's just my perspective.
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This is peculiar. When the main character's mom and Michael get together, wouldn't that make Seraphina his stepsister? I had assumed Xin would date Seraphina; this is why I'm already dropping the novel due to this perplexing issue. I don't comprehend why authors choose to depict the main character without parents, always with a lonely mom raising kids or the MC being an orphan because their parents died in a tragic accident. Why can't the MC have both parents? I know this is somewhat off-topic, but for goodness' sake, this is frustrating.
Ch 18 Unspoken Confessions - The_Last_Native3mthCommentedHe grew dark cat ears, and a tail minus the whiskers since the mere thought made his nose scrunched.
- The_Last_Native3mthReplied to Mobius_5trip
No
'I'm not the only one that can see the future.'