The grammar is trash for a contracted novel and the dialogue is completely idiotic. The mc is in the body of a 5 year old but everyone treat him like a teenager. The worse is how his adopted mother start training him even thought mc is a malnourished 5 year old, she don't even try to leave him in the hospital to check his healt, with this you can see how much thought the author really put in the novel. Another completely thing is how every 6 year old is playing better than adults, author clearly don't made his research before this, you should know that at this age kid are developing their coordination and muscle so for the to do what is described is ridiculuos. The fic have a great premise but the execution is trash on all levels
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