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Suck_Deez_Nutz_
Suck_Deez_Nutz_Lv134mth
2024-07-22 01:19

pretty good novel ............I love it .................If you are READING THIS go and finish the novel trust me you will not get dissapointed ................................................................................................................................... MESSAGE TO THE CREATER ----- very little to no information about the world is written !! work needed on this .......... ....... i have been watching this since day 1 so I can tell you as a loyal reader that you need to make the character a bit more attached to the reader *heart to heart* also if possible you can also develop more on supporting characters and their emotional attachment !! trust me it helps alottt .. also *system* is given much less importance you need to make it vast and add alot of skills (active and passive)...... make these all work and this novel's popularity will increase tremendously as it is already a pretty good novel................................................................... even if you don't I will still watch this till the end ......... best wishes and regards from my behalf :)

Football singularity

TrikoRex223
4.3
344 Chs

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TrikoRex223
TrikoRex223Author

Will be tackling that in the new ark now that they are older and starting to form a sense of self. felt no need to delve into that when they were young the dynamics of forming clis and following a leader was enough of a distinction from the actual football for me. Thanks for the advice very much appreciated hope you enjoy watching the world burn because it might happen.

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TOS
TOSLv4

This is good. I hope you will not drop it unless you have valid reasons. We'll keep coming back every time you post, so don't worry about not having devoted readers.

1yr

Steve_Aaron
Steve_AaronLv4

Just another Nigerian encouraging a fellow country man ..Don't stop your work is great [img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp]

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Rakim_Mwaura_4997
Rakim_Mwaura_4997Lv4

Love the novel especially the interaction with the system and the fact the mc seem fun with some personality

1yr
Kenrio
KenrioLv11

The grammar is trash for a contracted novel and the dialogue is completely idiotic. The mc is in the body of a 5 year old but everyone treat him like a teenager. The worse is how his adopted mother start training him even thought mc is a malnourished 5 year old, she don't even try to leave him in the hospital to check his healt, with this you can see how much thought the author really put in the novel. Another completely thing is how every 6 year old is playing better than adults, author clearly don't made his research before this, you should know that at this age kid are developing their coordination and muscle so for the to do what is described is ridiculuos. The fic have a great premise but the execution is trash on all levels

1yr
MikarTheGoat
MikarTheGoatLv4

Hope you keep up the good work this is me show some support and appreciation Thank you Author san

1yr
spaceman25
spaceman25Lv14

honestly it's a good book ,but it seems to be focusing more on everything other than football itself ,which isn't a bad thing but just isn't my cup of tea keep up the good work👍🏽

1yr
Toby_Lewis
Toby_LewisLv4

The Story seems promising hope the author sticks to it looking forward to see how it develops 🙌

1yr
wolfly_1662
wolfly_1662Lv14

It's extremely hard to find a good sports book on webnovel. Yet this is one of the best I've ever read so far.

1yr
Popolos324
Popolos324Lv4

it's really, really, really, really slow. like it been a year still story started and Mc is still the same age

7mth
soso1111
soso1111Lv6

Found another sport/Football novel again, great. Read a chapter or two but I'm not really a fan of 1st person narrative so skipping this. Anyway great novel and good luck

1yr
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