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rampa2510
rampa2510Lv142yr
2023-02-23 12:39

Great book with a lot of potential. Please read the first volume before making conclusions as that helps build the overall plot. After that the football part starts and it started as you expected the mc is playing pro football for the first time and he makes mistake learns and keeps getting better I hope the author keeps writing the Novel since I already had a football novel ghost on me which didn't fit well. Great work

Football singularity

TrikoRex223
4.3
492 Chs

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TOS
TOSLv4

This is good. I hope you will not drop it unless you have valid reasons. We'll keep coming back every time you post, so don't worry about not having devoted readers.

2yr

Steve_Aaron
Steve_AaronLv12

Just another Nigerian encouraging a fellow country man ..Don't stop your work is great [img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp]

1yr
Suck_Deez_Nutz_
Suck_Deez_Nutz_Lv13

pretty good novel ............I love it .................If you are READING THIS go and finish the novel trust me you will not get dissapointed ................................................................................................................................... MESSAGE TO THE CREATER ----- very little to no information about the world is written !! work needed on this .......... ....... i have been watching this since day 1 so I can tell you as a loyal reader that you need to make the character a bit more attached to the reader *heart to heart* also if possible you can also develop more on supporting characters and their emotional attachment !! trust me it helps alottt .. also *system* is given much less importance you need to make it vast and add alot of skills (active and passive)...... make these all work and this novel's popularity will increase tremendously as it is already a pretty good novel................................................................... even if you don't I will still watch this till the end ......... best wishes and regards from my behalf :)

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Rakim_Mwaura_4997
Rakim_Mwaura_4997Lv4

Love the novel especially the interaction with the system and the fact the mc seem fun with some personality

2yr
Kenrio
KenrioLv11

The grammar is trash for a contracted novel and the dialogue is completely idiotic. The mc is in the body of a 5 year old but everyone treat him like a teenager. The worse is how his adopted mother start training him even thought mc is a malnourished 5 year old, she don't even try to leave him in the hospital to check his healt, with this you can see how much thought the author really put in the novel. Another completely thing is how every 6 year old is playing better than adults, author clearly don't made his research before this, you should know that at this age kid are developing their coordination and muscle so for the to do what is described is ridiculuos. The fic have a great premise but the execution is trash on all levels

1yr
MikarTheGoat
MikarTheGoatLv4

Hope you keep up the good work this is me show some support and appreciation Thank you Author san

2yr
spaceman25
spaceman25Lv14

honestly it's a good book ,but it seems to be focusing more on everything other than football itself ,which isn't a bad thing but just isn't my cup of tea keep up the good work馃憤馃徑

2yr
Toby_Lewis
Toby_LewisLv4

The Story seems promising hope the author sticks to it looking forward to see how it develops 馃檶

2yr
wolfly_1662
wolfly_1662Lv14

It's extremely hard to find a good sports book on webnovel. Yet this is one of the best I've ever read so far.

2yr
Popolos324
Popolos324Lv4

it's really, really, really, really slow. like it been a year still story started and Mc is still the same age

1yr
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