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TinyBookDragon
TinyBookDragonLv42yr
2023-01-14 23:00

I try not to comment negative things without at least giving a reason but I can't put it into words this time. This is boring. Every interaction the MC has, every thought, every choice, etc bores me. The grammar is fine. Everything else is meh.

The Wanderer - A X-Men Crossover Fan-Fiction

GodOfFreedom
4.2
181 Chs

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chris_Do_random
chris_Do_randomLv11

Shh 🤫

1yr
Ormangf
OrmangfLv14

Shh

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OmnipresentGod
OmnipresentGodLv4

I am following your work for some times..... That's why I'm going to read this.... hope this is good🤞 And Don't you dare drop this😘 And last tanks for the chapter....

3yr

marcelll3214
marcelll3214Lv2

Story is very simple but not bad. THere are few things i do not like. For example pointles R stuff that just fills the chapters. But the worst thing currently for me about the story is 70 chapters in and only a few weeks passed in the story. The things that happened already happened incredibly fast and should have been spread more and later in the story. Also most of what happened is something i would use as downtime in story pace. So something relevant and plot worthy happened and then put some of this plotpoints in. Because as of now nothing really happened yet, just fillers...

2yr
Slave_of_freedom
Slave_of_freedomLv1

I liked the premise, especially the fact that the protagonist always puts his freedom in the first place, but the romance spoiled everything, the protagonist is a person who values ​​​​freedom but even so he stuck to love

2yr
PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4

I'm hooked on your other FF, I'll probably read this one when I have more chapters. It's just a spam review. ....................................................................................................................................................

3yr
Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6

Again interesting chapter. Plot is developing. Looking good. excited for more. Again interesting chapter. Plot is developing. Looking good. excited for more.

3yr
Aldy_Satya
Aldy_SatyaLv4

is just boring , he just create peak human perk, and there to many chapter about s*x

2yr
Arentsvelt
ArentsveltLv5

I really liked the novel. It is not difficult to read as it is written in good grammar. The main character is likeable and interesting. What is dissapointing is the romance. It was good at first. I really liked how pure the romance started. But when it became the focus of the story, the interesting things the marvel world should've been able to present is nowhere and it became boring. Too much bed scenes. Good at first but when there is bs in almost every chapter is too much.

1yr
Meh2020
Meh2020Lv2

Edgeloard MC killed a common criminal during his first encounter ever. He wasn't in danger, and there was no true reason for him to do it. Along with the way he had sexual interaction with a minor - that he didn't know within the first 25 chapters. It's too much of a power fantasy with very few interesting aspects. I typically don't leave these types of negative comments, but a lot of points truly bothered me. Especially since it had a lot of potential with the overall idea.

1yr
Luca_Tavares
Luca_TavaresLv10

her good beginning, if I have to point one thing that I would rather not see in this new project it would be making the MC OP too fast. Silverfire had a good balance with the slice of life facet and I can understand that a 100+ chap story can be draining, but pietro was already one shooting thor/hulk level powerhouses and on top of that he got a stone... Anyway I liked the limitations and that you didnd go for reality warping

3yr
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