Story is very simple but not bad. THere are few things i do not like. For example pointles R stuff that just fills the chapters. But the worst thing currently for me about the story is 70 chapters in and only a few weeks passed in the story. The things that happened already happened incredibly fast and should have been spread more and later in the story. Also most of what happened is something i would use as downtime in story pace. So something relevant and plot worthy happened and then put some of this plotpoints in. Because as of now nothing really happened yet, just fillers...
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The story isn't really going anywhere. Its the same tiny plot on repeat. At chapter 145 more than half is purely interaction between MC and the FL (And I mean more than 50% of the words are actually some sort of interaction) not a lot of Wandering so far. They are incapable of talking normally, every sentence is My Love, My firefly.... etc, even when talking about what should we eat. It feels like a parody of a new couple during the honey moon phase but to the extreme, it's not even cringe, its tiring to read, wondering when the author will get over it and start writing them like normal living beings. Otherwise its the MC cold eye and scaring everyone just by looking or powerup montage that takes 0.5-1 chapter. Rinse repeat. There is legit no story, no plot, no goal, no slice of life beyond their R. But it has been a few weeks\months at most since the start of the novel. Personally, other than the slightly overuse "oh my love...." which I mostly found dumb with how often it was said, it was just boring, for certain not what the name implied\promised.
