Review Detail of Gavyn_Mack in reincarnated as a sealed evil

after reading this story and I still am, I have come to a conclusion. the writing quality is good with very little mistakes, the story on the other hand, not so much, there are a lot points in the story where something happens, only for it to be forgotten, in other words there is a lot of plot holes and it happens often, which always leaves me wondering what happened, also the story is always changing, which makes it hard to know what is happening, for example, the mc could win a fight, and then someone appeared and then the mc would gain a mission from someone else(God) and he leaves, what happened to the original person? but I will admit a lot of interesting things happen,but the writing could be a bit smoother. the story is always updating so that's good, and the author does describe how a character looks,so that's also good, and the world background is fine. In the end, im enjoying the story, but what is happening changes really fast. very fast paced. anyways good job aauthor.