With how ADHD and scatter brained I am your guess is as good as mine

Thanks, I really do appreciate it

Oh, and the near constant changing light is a work in progress, I’ve got like three side projects going and the personalities of all my characters are mixing in my head, I’m writing everything down to avoid that so hopefully light will be much more constant in the future

If it’s about the random encounter with a body jumper, the encounter and the jumper both serve a larger purpose, I had to include it now and build off of it, I probably could’ve done it a bit less suddenly though in all honesty

Thank you, I definitely appreciate and agree

I’m horrible at summaries, which is ironic really, so if that doesn’t help let me know and I’ll try again, or I’ll just rewrite the chapter to make it clearer and easier to read.

Adding another problem to the MC’s life

Yeah that’s a personal weakness of mine, I get so many ideas that I hop from one to the next pretty haphazardly, I’m doing my best to work on it but overall Im just glad people don’t hate it, thanks for the review, constructive criticism will only help me improve

The cover, I suck at art so I just searched free to use images on google

the lycan form looks somewhat like this

thank you!

honestly I have no idea, I'm winging it here.

thank you, and I appreciate you being honest.

thanks for the feedback, I hope I can use it to improve, no hard feelings I appreciate the honesty.

dude maybe you should start writing, that was really good!

thanks!

totally fine and understandable but read a bit more, the system changes dramatically

don't worry about it at all, I don't take stuff like that personally, if you're genuinely pointing out a mistake I made ill be more than glad to take the feedback and improve what's being pointed out, so really it's absolutely fine and there's no issue.

I went back and fixed it, added a bit too too, please do make sure to keep pointing out mistakes like that, it really helps me out and I appreciate it!

thanks for pointing that out, that is a mistake I'd been looking for, I'll fix it, thank you!