so far as of chapter 2 this is a great story can't what to see more.............................................................................................................................

ok I have read somewhat to 20 chapter's but I think I have one thing to say. we all know it's a translation but please edit some names because it can be hard to remember or they are all over the place how similar they are. and world background so far is good.

At the moment of this review, I read until chapter 100. my opinion is very simple: a interesting story butchered by a horrible machine translation. just to be clear, the translation is: garbage, trash, horrible, disgusting, amusing, ridiculous, poetry. the amount of comments in the first few chapters is ok, but after 50 almost everyone dropped this novel. it doesn't matter how good is the story, the translation is garbage.

Writing quality one star: Seems like after the first couple chapters the translation turns absolutely abysmal. Every line is separated and the grammar is horrible. Worse than standard mtl. Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting. Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though. Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day. World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology? Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star

Sou brasileiro e nao sei ler em inglês, então to usando tradutor para ler essa magnífica obra, como também nao sei escrever em inglês, darei minha resenha em PT-BR mesmo, vle autor, obra incrível, bem diferente das usuais q tem extremo foco no prota e esquece do entorno

The structures of the sentences is pretty bad, in a later chapter idk I did an expample. The story could be good, but as I said the structure of the sentences is so bad it ruins the flow of the story. Some grammar mistakes here and there. Story nothing new, but till now havent seen any story which has done a good job at writing such a story,pretty sad

A great story if you don't want to use your brain or question anything and just relax whilst reading repeating stories of the mc shocking everyone, then traveling to a higher "plane" and the repeating, just as I repeatedly said repeating. A little bit of fiction(around chapter 400), the story is slowing down (instead of there being a single battle which was like 1 chap long, I think the last 50 chaps were just one big battle in which new people just randomly join, without a real explanation) i mean like yeah you have the classical rail guns and robots but that's all the since fiction for now like I said not all too much fiction, our mc is just a stupid guy who just uses the system he was given once at the start to create a "perfect" world for life and then forgets it except for like three times when the mc actually had to decide something all the real thinking is done by the people of the world, which are actually not as intelligent as a boul of hot pizza but instead have the thought complexity of a 8 year old kid I think it's a great read to just shut your brain down and not think at all it's not perfect English but it's readable so yeah, that are my thoughts about this book

this has to be the worst translation I've ever seen the story would be much better if it actually made sense

One of the best novel i have ever read.