Item: Build A Technological Civilization
Rating: 3.2
Author: Quinton1200

Quinton1200Lv41yr

2023-05-14 00:11

this has to be the worst translation I've ever seen the story would be much better if it actually made sense

Build A Technological Civilization

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slimy_BoiLv4

ok I have read somewhat to 20 chapter's but I think I have one thing to say. we all know it's a translation but please edit some names because it can be hard to remember or they are all over the place how similar they are. and world background so far is good.

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At the moment of this review, I read until chapter 100. my opinion is very simple: a interesting story butchered by a horrible machine translation. just to be clear, the translation is: garbage, trash, horrible, disgusting, amusing, ridiculous, poetry. the amount of comments in the first few chapters is ok, but after 50 almost everyone dropped this novel. it doesn't matter how good is the story, the translation is garbage.

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