Review Detail of ssdxd in THE GÀMER : IN THE MULTIVERSE ( AU )

Item: THE GÀMER : IN THE MULTIVERSE ( AU )
Rating: 2.4

Review detail

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okay this story is very confusing the main character was told this world is mixed world of marvel and dc but this Mc keeps forgetting or he's just that stupid, or the author forgot what he put in the earlier chapters. the he/she is so confusing as well when your trying to figure out whom is talking or who is who so. the people who are putting 4 or 5 stars on it not sure where they got that from got to chapter 11 to see if it would get better but it didn't . author needs to do a major edit on the story so it flows better and it clears things up

THE GÀMER : IN THE MULTIVERSE ( AU )

Xuefang1

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Daoist584937Lv14Daoist584937

And I was trolling a little I know the writings bad but the author did put a lot of work into the novel whether you like it or not

_Darker_Than_Black:weren't you disagreed the same thing in the first comment.

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Daoist584937Lv14Daoist584937

False

1yr

ssdxdLv14ssdxd

true

Daoist584937:False

1yr

Daoist584937Lv14Daoist584937

Bad brain power my guy

ssdxd:true

1yr

ScarletQCLv14ScarletQC

Explain.

Daoist584937:False

1yr

DeaboroLv12Deaboro

typing in false used up his "good" brain power already

ScarletQC:Explain.

1yr

Daoist584937Lv14Daoist584937

You should know what is a he she then where is the the confused part abou dc mc

ssdxd:true

1yr

Daoist584937Lv14Daoist584937

Why don’t you fill in all the words he missed

Deaboro:typing in false used up his "good" brain power already

1yr

Daoist584937Lv14Daoist584937

So the story can make sence

Deaboro:typing in false used up his "good" brain power already

1yr

NyxioLv4Nyxio

That’s the author’s most basic job

Daoist584937:Why don’t you fill in all the words he missed

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Daoist584937Lv14Daoist584937

But it’s like a puzzle it’s fun

Nyxio:That’s the author’s most basic job

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DBSHLv3DBSH

not for me, who has trouble reading books in foreign languages 😓

Daoist584937:But it’s like a puzzle it’s fun

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Daoist584937Lv14Daoist584937

I have OCD

DBSH:not for me, who has trouble reading books in foreign languages 😓

10mth

Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

You are a masochist and sadist, you want others to read something unreadable and have fun being mentally tortured like you... wow, evil has no limits

Daoist584937:But it’s like a puzzle it’s fun

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Daoist584937Lv14Daoist584937

I like the harder puzzles and I can successfully solve them pretty fast this is light work

Gabichu_Yeah:You are a masochist and sadist, you want others to read something unreadable and have fun being mentally tortured like you... wow, evil has no limits

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Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

Translating the fanfic work is illegible, no riddle solves meaningless sentences 😅

Daoist584937:I like the harder puzzles and I can successfully solve them pretty fast this is light work

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IreallylikereadingLv4Ireallylikereading

i suggest you to be this fanfics translator seeing as you seem to really like giving yourself a challenge, you did say this was fun for you right?

Daoist584937:I like the harder puzzles and I can successfully solve them pretty fast this is light work

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HatemeidontcareLv4Hatemeidontcare

nice try author👍

Daoist584937:But it’s like a puzzle it’s fun

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_Darker_Than_BlackLv12_Darker_Than_Black

weren't you disagreed the same thing in the first comment.

Daoist584937:But it’s like a puzzle it’s fun

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Daoist584937Lv14Daoist584937

I don’t know why but as I was reading the words would just fit like I was adding and taking away words I also don’t understand your question

_Darker_Than_Black:weren't you disagreed the same thing in the first comment.

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