_Darker_Than_Black
Every story is a lie. Ironically, we love to live in lie more than the reality, that is an undeniable truth.
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Use dad, it sounds perverse.
What I Didn't like— Cock Blocking for consecutive 4(maybe 5) Times till 24 Chaps(till that I could persist hardly). MC gets played by everyone around him(maybe not everyone but most), but never learns to think. Author says its character development, but he never even shows a slightest hint of developement. If you don't like MCs getting plotted into someone else's plan, so don't read. He is weak. Yes, he is the weakest. He does have power, but sometimes system glitches, sometimes he doesn't have enough eroge points, sometimes he just stands and looks around. MC is a idiot who always thinks with his lower half, but there isn't a single lemon till chapter 24. Some would say, plot would develope and have patience, etc. but if you cannot even manage to hook a reader till that point then it doesn't even matter how much better of a plan you have in mind.
Sometimes, I think, he deserve getting Cucked.
was mentioning dirty, necessary?
Depends
So, it can only be romantic love? nothing else?
I almost mistook you for Ghosty
All the events till now and the ongoing plot too, looks forced to me.
It might have been funny during early chapters but it's irritating now when we are standing on 15th Chap.
It's getting frustrating to see a dumb MC, I know he is bound to situation but it's over 15Chaps and he is still weak.
It's already second-blueballing