The writing quality is too horrible, the plot doesn't exist, the story development is confusing, the character interaction is unpleasant... and the main problem is that the fanfic seems to be a Chinese cultivation/ xianxian/ wuxia novel .
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mas a historia é ruim mesmo
dont post such garbage, then you wont have to deal with hate.
so this is garbage for you....huh...if this is garbage then I'm gonna say I love this garbage and I still have my loyal readers and the ones who are currently reading without any efforts...we all love this garbage...if you have that much time to past a review on garbage then **** what can I say... maybe you're somekind of professional author or maybe you love to demotivate people...
bad novel* its not garbage but there is much to work on, the novel almost reminds me of a novel written for training instead of public release.
The story is really bad and you haven't tried to improve the story even after 300+ chapters. Obviously, someone will like it, but most of them don't like your story and it can be seen from the ratings and comments. You don't need to be an author to understand that the story is bad. But I usually judge a story by the number of power stones and your story has almost no power stones, which says a lot. Have you ever collected 1000 power stones or at least 500?
You didn't even understand what I said. In fact, I wrote that it is necessary to strive to improve, so that there would be even more readers, fans on patreon. But you say that what I already have is enough for me and I will not improve. As a writer, you should strive for more, but you enjoy that small number of fans. All those haters are your lost fans and money. And that's your job to write. You're the author and I'm the reader, why should I go start writing? What kind of logic is this? No, I'll go and find an author who's better than you. And I'll subscribe to his patreon, not yours. I said my honest opinion about what I read, as well as other reviews, but you just can't accept criticism and don't want to improve as a writer. And the way you send everyone away and insult them says what a disgusting person you are.
And don't forget to screen my second comment and put it in the same place where you posted the first one. So that people understand that you took it out of context and lost half of its meaning. Did it take you 9 hours to write an answer after the screenshot? Lol.
now I can't go back ...I don't have enough time as I'm a student... and first I've already Asked my readers of they want a rewrite or not....but they told me to continue...I just want to finish it now... that's all I want to say... and what would you do when someone says that your work is a garbage... you're mocking me that you've never got 500 Powerstones... it's not good
Perhaps because I use a translator, you misunderstand me. I didn't say that your ff is "garbage". It was another person who spoke. As for 500 stones, I'm not mocking you. I meant that we should strive for this. Obviously, the better the job, the more power stones are given to you. The more stones there are, the more readers there are both here and on Patreon. Okay, let's forget it.
Que gente tan tóxica, no te gusta no leas, autor solo haz lo que quieras [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
What do you expect from a thief. This is a stolen work that was GOOGLE translated from spanish from here, wâttpâd côm/story/210912151-esto-no-es-marvel [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
