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Soniimarx
SoniimarxLv13yr
2022-03-17 15:23

I love how the MC thought he was alone, only to be bombarded with a snap back to reality pretty much. I really like how stories like that turn out with that premise and I know I'll enjoy this too with the more I read. The grammar needs some work, but I'm not gonna hold you too much to that.

Deity Apocalypse: The World After The Fall

TheHeavenlySleeper
4.8
29 Chs

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TheHeavenlySleeper
TheHeavenlySleeperAuthor

English is really not my first language so there might be some minor mistakes here and there ;-; but I promise after I get to 30s or 50s chapters I will rewrite everything!

3yr
Soniimarx
SoniimarxLv1

That's okay. I'm willing to stick along for the ride.

3yr
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TheHeavenlySleeper
TheHeavenlySleeperAuthor

The shameless author is here! Yep, I will rate my story 5 stars cuz- why not? it's not really that bad... it's actually good in my eyes but dunno about you- Well anyways if you either liked it or disliked it just say it in comments or reviews.

3yr

TheCraZyaUthOr19
TheCraZyaUthOr19Lv2

To be honest, I'm disappointed, why? Because I really enjoy this yet it only consist of 7 chapters!? I keep scrolling and now it's the end? Author I need more of this. I really like your system and despite the fact that your first language isn't english, I can say that your description is easy to understand and very vivid. I hope you continue writing this masterpiece.

3yr
Morororo
MorororoLv3

Good read, the first chapter was good and the author did a good job with the introduction, I love a story when it is about war, it kinda gives you many ideas about an epic scene. Overall, not a bad novel. Great job!

3yr
Kailykilimo
KailykilimoLv11

Awesome, the novel was worth my time, l enjoyed every chapter. Keep up the good work author, looking forward to your future novels. Waiting for chap update [img=update]

2yr
keulijeu
keulijeuLv2

Very good and descriptive! I love the way you started the novel with “A meaningless war” or smth like that. Also, your word-building is nice, I like it a lot! The plot already is intriguing and the book itself from the first phrase. Keep up the good work!

3yr
XiaoMai
XiaoMaiLv5

I am really impressed! I enjoyed the first chapter down to the last drop. I also see that the author updates frequently. That's great dedication! I admire you, author HeavenlySleeper. Thank you and keep up the good job!

3yr
baoxiashun19
baoxiashun19Lv11

This is a good story with a good plot mc level progress is a little bit fast but that's understandable since he is op in this world so far everything is good I enjoy reading this story.

3yr
DaoistX3e65A
DaoistX3e65ALv1

This is actually a very interesting novel so far and got me hooked . Grammar is a little bad but still understandable so it's alright for now. Seems good until now and I hope it grows into another big thing because this seriously have a lot of potential. And I am not very good with English either so... yeah it's all good in my eyes . Keep it up author.

3yr
loti_apathae
loti_apathaeLv13

Maybe it's because English isn't your first language, but your descriptions are precise and easily digestible. The plot with the gods and system thingy about gods and demons it really interesting. If the content follows through and more chapters are released, I could see this becoming the next big thing

3yr
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