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What I love about this novel the most is how I'm depth the author guess with their characters, enough to give the towel main characters their own POV with each chapter. I love that speech of the writing style and even how the story progresses utilizing that very style of writing... It's just so unique and so interesting. The story was capable of piquing my interest and maintaining it to a certain degree so I'm proud to say this is something I can easily see myself reading through to the end.
Just saying. Absolutely love the story and the pacing, along with the characters introduced so far. The grammar and descriptions used are immaculate and it is so easy to fall for the characters introduced and just how much they help give an understanding of what's going on and the world around them. This story easily comes off to me as a world where My Hero Academia meets Solo Leveling, both being stories that I loved, with the tie to Greek Mythology only making it so much better. I look forward to binge reading this whenever I have time.
Lol, thank you for the support. I hope you stick around for this somewhat long story as it unfolds and I force these characters to grow much more and progress the plot. I'll try my best not to disappoint though and I'll try to keep the updates as stable as I can.
I've come to like the story so far and the characters despite not reaching all that far in it due to distractions that came my way. Don't get me wrong, from a portion of the first chapter, my interest was grabbed and I love the fact that I can imagine the scenery so well with your descriptions. Your character design is admirable and I really love seeing when authors get it right. I look forward to reading the rest, you've earned yourself a regular reader, with that, I hope this story takes off soon as it would deserve to.
Thank you so much! I'll try my best to get more chapters out for your enjoyment lol. I update on weekdays as long as I can write on the day.
Thank you so much for the review, and I really do appreciate it. I hope you stick along for the roller coaster of a ride I plan to put myself and my readers through though lol.
Okay, So I only read chapter one, and I must say IT WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. I loved every sentence in this story. Everything flowed so well, and it had me so invested from the very first paragraph. You have piqued my interest, and as such, you must immediately take responsibility. So you see, this is probably, the best story I have come across on this app/site, and as such, I refuse to read the next chapter and still be this invested if there is nothing coming after it. I do love the world you made over there and the characters introduced so far. Now, from a fellow author and avid reader, you are doing well, and you deserve a lot more views on this magnificent piece of art. NOW UPDATE PLEASE
This type of story is not my cup of tea, but I can see the appeal to people who often indulge in reading stories with similar plot points. Personally, I really don't like the main character, but I can understand their intentions and motives. Your descriptions are decent enough, but I feel they could be enhanced through the use of slightly better grammar structure and a tad bit more pronouns. Overall, decent story for the genre. I hope you do well in the future.
Thank you so much on the feedback. When I was creating my reason/version of why vampires exist in this world, I thought it would be too much to grasp at one time seeing that I'd be challenging something that was already established and going against what people believed vampires should be, so I was nervous about that. I'm glad to see it worked out.