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MorororoLv32yr
2022-03-16 20:04

Good read, the first chapter was good and the author did a good job with the introduction, I love a story when it is about war, it kinda gives you many ideas about an epic scene. Overall, not a bad novel. Great job!

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Morororo
MorororoLv3

Oh and as a bonus, use past tense don't use like: Starts, stops, gives, and other words that end with "S" instead of past tense, I got criticized for this, and also no worries if you write countable words that end with "s" The system is sick too!

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Thank you for your advice!

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