Review Detail of lord_couchpotato in Supreme General Reborn In Dxd With One Wish.(Verse)
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Pretty standard novel, fun to read but many things are personally not up to my liking like mc trying to scheme everyone but each of his scheme is heavily dependent on luck, and mc's personality is bit off for the character design. I mean most of his scheme's does not make much sense and he is missing that edge that people of that position posses he does come off more as a teenager trying to show of than a general (No offense just honestly saying). Most of the showoff at the start was not required and deal with ophis could have blown in his face moreover what if someone other than ophis found him at start it would have been game over. Plus mc is getting too powerful too soon there seems no efforts on his end he literally reached ultimate class in 2 days without doing anything meaningful. But still that is just me ranting, story is not bad just after reading soo many DxD fanfics it just seem a bit too mainstream.
Supreme General Reborn In Dxd With One Wish.(Verse)
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Thank you for the review bro, I get you, sigh, dxd is like One of, if not The most Fanfic make over novels, it is kinda hard not to follow a cliche even if you never even seen that cliche because someone else might have already redd that somewhere else, so even i wouldn't know its cliche, I'll try to see what I can improve, about the power up *Ahem* I'll blame it on the non stop potential growth he got from The God where basically his power just continues to increase without him doing it anything and when he does train it will be explosive, anyway thank you the review is much appreciatedđ
i have read a decent amount of dxd fanfiction and just a couple have a good love line you could build a non-typical plot through this or develop your own lore by joining some faction i don't remember a single mc that would be engaged in real factional activities (not the devil) let's say like a magician and there is not a single ff about gg fallen for that matter
infinityGod:Thank you for the review bro, I get you, sigh, dxd is like One of, if not The most Fanfic make over novels, it is kinda hard not to follow a cliche even if you never even seen that cliche because someone else might have already redd that somewhere else, so even i wouldn't know its cliche, I'll try to see what I can improve, about the power up *Ahem* I'll blame it on the non stop potential growth he got from The God where basically his power just continues to increase without him doing it anything and when he does train it will be explosive, anyway thank you the review is much appreciatedđ
SlowWittedSong:i have read a decent amount of dxd fanfiction and just a couple have a good love line you could build a non-typical plot through this or develop your own lore by joining some faction i don't remember a single mc that would be engaged in real factional activities (not the devil) let's say like a magician and there is not a single ff about gg fallen for that matter
SlowWittedSong:i have read a decent amount of dxd fanfiction and just a couple have a good love line you could build a non-typical plot through this or develop your own lore by joining some faction i don't remember a single mc that would be engaged in real factional activities (not the devil) let's say like a magician and there is not a single ff about gg fallen for that matter