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JustRonhan
JustRonhanLv143yr
2022-04-21 20:58

I’ mgona be honest I don’t like the story. Mostly the very slow pace and how the MC seems to have constant bad luck. It’s also not really a MCUxHP story and more a multiverse story since it’s not even the same world. So far his system is only used to traverse the worlds to the point where it’s only a plot device to explain his bad luck. The author said wait until chapter 10 for something to happen but all we got was more bad luck with him having no talent at all for sorcery. The only thing I really found redeeming was that his existence in the Hp world updated the hp story in the mcu. All in all I just found the lack of anything good happening to the character without a massive drawback incredibly frustrating to read.

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Skepparn
SkepparnLv14

Felt the same, like what will the mc actually do if he's completely useless in everything he tries, it's frustrating

romeotango148
romeotango148Lv14

The beginning is also almost identical to another fanfic ive seen here, dont remember the name though

_Solomon_
_Solomon_Lv13

is it the one where the mc gets reborn as Lockhart and his system allows him to go to the Marvel world...

romeotango148:The beginning is also almost identical to another fanfic ive seen here, dont remember the name though
romeotango148
romeotango148Lv14

Don’t remember, sorry

_Solomon_:is it the one where the mc gets reborn as Lockhart and his system allows him to go to the Marvel world...
Nafriza_Arg17
Nafriza_Arg17Lv3

lol, what annoyed me the most was when the MC revealed he was just an ordinary person

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