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OukisLips
OukisLipsLv153yr
2022-04-03 12:34

The MC is weaker than a mob character, and he doesn't even get to learn magic, so what's the point of a HP crossover? Also, the pace is agonizingly slow, and not in a slow and steady wins the race kind of way, but rather in a meandering, stagnating and tedious way that doesn't contribute anything to the plot or character development

(HP X MCU) Multiversal Adventure : World Outside Hogwarts

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Stupid webnovel wont even let me swear or i would give you a piece of my mind. Well the story is really bad and i kinda feel like you are improvising on spot without a framework and it just end up being really bad

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since this is marvel wouldn't mc just go to kamar-taj instead of hogwarts if he wasn't a wizard? The description seems like it's dramatizing so heavily when in hp world it'd be a problem to be born without magic but in marvel world there's so many ways to be op that if he isn't op within the first 50 chapters then you're doing something wrong instead

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