Review Detail of Darius_Chromwell in Protagonist Abuser Chat Group

Item: Protagonist Abuser Chat Group
Rating: 1.6

Review detail

Darius_ChromwellLv42yrDarius_Chromwell

this story has a problem with pacing, it started out rushed then smoothed out for the Naruto ark but quickly fell back into being rushed afterwards.

Protagonist Abuser Chat Group

Iamxourtingdeath

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IamxourtingdeathAuthorIamxourtingdeath

Lol thats not even true, if then the Naruto part was a bit rushed, but the rest is more slowpaced. After all its a chat group fic and they spent like twenty chaps in another world

2yr

PythiaLv10Pythia

Author- "lol thats not true." Also author- proceeds to explain why it's actually true. -_- really man?

Iamxourtingdeath:Lol thats not even true, if then the Naruto part was a bit rushed, but the rest is more slowpaced. After all its a chat group fic and they spent like twenty chaps in another world

2yr

zcxxLv4zcxx

it is trash dont justify your trashy copy paste novel.

Iamxourtingdeath:Lol thats not even true, if then the Naruto part was a bit rushed, but the rest is more slowpaced. After all its a chat group fic and they spent like twenty chaps in another world

1yr