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Kaizou_KoiLv112yr
2022-09-12 21:45

This is too much for me.I wanted to drop it at first but I thought it would be more better after.But I was disappointed.There is no character growth and despite being op the author shows mc as a pushover.There is no plot and the story looks dull.

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