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Pythia
PythiaLv112yr
2022-07-01 03:14

Anti 5 star bot spam. I could give a really huge and constructive review for the author to improve from but i'm too tired to list the huge issues that anyone with half a brain cell can see so imma just bullet point it. -MC is far too passive in everything, in terms of relationships and self progression. -Took 18 chapters and a whole three months for the story to actually begin on it's premise. (Dimensional chat group) -The author makes extreme ,borderline gay, descriptions of the MC's sculptured, chiselled and perfect body that puts gods to shame. So much so that every female within observable distance creams themselves. (Seriously half the book is a description of his abs or something similar) - Very repetitive and predictable/cliche. -Writing is decent. However, the writing is very sluggish and feels blocky(?). Potential to be a great book but ruined by a loser protagonist thats given everything on a platter and does nothing with it.

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EclypseX
3.8
243 Chs

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schizocat
schizocatLv2

Haha, dude. Calling it cliche would be wrong. Even akikan can't compare with the amount of repetitiveness this book has on descriptions.

2yr
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Levicious_Xazabi
Levicious_XazabiLv13

At least Akikan has the plot

schizocat:Haha, dude. Calling it cliche would be wrong. Even akikan can't compare with the amount of repetitiveness this book has on descriptions.
2yr
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sagepotatoOAA
sagepotatoOAALv4

thx for the heads up

1yr
3
PRiMoRiDiaL
PRiMoRiDiaLLv4

H Protagonist without H. Or doing H. Meh what a disappointing MC.

1yr
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CharCRD
CharCRDLv1

Too repetitive, its become a slice of life fic that focuses on the MC's looks and superficial relationships and almost no chat room/multiverse and the story hasnt progressed for multiple chapters.

2yr

KasukabeDe
KasukabeDeLv3

I'm starting to reach my limit with the behavior of the MC and how the story progresses.I'm going to name some things that I didn't like about the story. 1-The MC is pathetic, literally (and that comes from an h). Nothing more to say. 2-The progress of the story is "too" slow, so much so that I wouldn't be surprised if many skip chapters, simply to see the start of some mission of the dimensional chat group. 3-There is some other hole in the story that is simply not consistent. 4-I am completely sure that no member of the chat along with the MC progressed with the skills they obtained or have. I won't even mention the "change of history". 5- I will not even mention the expressions, communications, attitudes, etc. It's not the best I've seen but it's not the worst either, we just need to improve these parts and the story will be even more acceptable. There's more but I just don't feel like writing it all down. That's all I hope the author improves these things. Este es el puntaje que le doy a la historia. Lo cambiaré cuando vea un mejor progreso pero por ahora este es el puntaje.

2yr
Iglirgus
IglirgusLv11

Pretty good start and most categories of writing are decent, the only issue I have is when the MC becomes handsome and by that I mean so much so that after about the 4th chapter every other chapter is about how handsome he is or how much girls blush when they stare at him. I have nothing against handsomeness but it adds no substance when its mentioned for 9 chapters straight with no development or regular usage of the actual chat group

2yr
bondarant
bondarantLv2

Reveal spoiler

2yr
KumenEX
KumenEXLv14

I legit thought it was actually good yhen I read it. I was heavily disappointed. Read it and you'll find out why or read some other reviews.

2yr
EclypseX
EclypseXAuthor

Not shameless, but just extremely proud and excited about my own story~!! I have a lot already planned and I can't wait to put those ideas into the story and share it with you all~!!! Hope you enjoy~!!!

2yr
Spabsta
SpabstaLv14

It’s confusing how someone can write a trash ff. Literally if you read other ff similar to this and aren’t dumb you can make a perfect one So how?

2yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

The male lead is a shame, he is also homosexual. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
Sxhen
SxhenLv10

it's just about how the people around you react and unnecessary things ........................................................[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
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