I'm starting to reach my limit with the behavior of the MC and how the story progresses.I'm going to name some things that I didn't like about the story. 1-The MC is pathetic, literally (and that comes from an h). Nothing more to say. 2-The progress of the story is "too" slow, so much so that I wouldn't be surprised if many skip chapters, simply to see the start of some mission of the dimensional chat group. 3-There is some other hole in the story that is simply not consistent. 4-I am completely sure that no member of the chat along with the MC progressed with the skills they obtained or have. I won't even mention the "change of history". 5- I will not even mention the expressions, communications, attitudes, etc. It's not the best I've seen but it's not the worst either, we just need to improve these parts and the story will be even more acceptable. There's more but I just don't feel like writing it all down. That's all I hope the author improves these things. Este es el puntaje que le doy a la historia. Lo cambiaré cuando vea un mejor progreso pero por ahora este es el puntaje.
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Thank you so much for giving me concise suggestions and criticisms XD I'll definitely keep these points in mind and improve on future chapters!
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EclypseX:Thank you so much for giving me concise suggestions and criticisms XD I'll definitely keep these points in mind and improve on future chapters!
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thx for the heads up
what's W mean?
Srtsuna:W author
what's L mean?
GuDaoistBigbro:L
what's H mean?
W means win, L means lose and H means horrible (maybe)
Jhon_Ariel_Castro:what's H mean?
Ok, I was wrong H means H*ntai.
Nobody_0wens:W means win, L means lose and H means horrible (maybe)
thanks for the info brother
Nobody_0wens:W means win, L means lose and H means horrible (maybe)
hopefully its bad where im at chp 37 does it get better from there aurhor or someone else
EclypseX:Thank you so much for giving me concise suggestions and criticisms XD I'll definitely keep these points in mind and improve on future chapters!
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