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2022-05-22 11:37

I like the overall idea of the book but having hard time making it through the chapters to really invest in the story. There seems to be some translation issues that makes the book confusing. I like the story but have had to look up a few words that are uncommon to use such as cephalo and other times have no idea who they are referring to. I think they kept calling the FL mother, mother disease and also referred to team leader when talking about the child or other family members. There are times when it mentions the same name twice but clearly talking about two different people. Like i said it is bvery confusing.

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Yeahh.... the white flour become white face.... thats totally a machine translate mistake

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