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Clumsy_QueeN
Clumsy_QueeNLv152yr
2022-07-15 06:11

I really liked this start of this story and i had hoped to read it but the grammar challenges are too much for me. If that could be improved id be back immediately! It has great potential!

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felcie
felcieLv14

Yeah!..its so nice to read, but because of the grammar, my interest slowly fading.. but if it will be improved, surely i will be back reading it.

AvidReader_1234
AvidReader_1234Lv15

I am unable to read past 8 chapters. very bad grammar and gender mess

ZoMeow
ZoMeowLv4

same

AvidReader_1234:I am unable to read past 8 chapters. very bad grammar and gender mess
Ivierymaiven
IvierymaivenLv5

8!! You were too kind. Very patient. I gave up after starting the 2nd chapter. I just couldn't!

AvidReader_1234:I am unable to read past 8 chapters. very bad grammar and gender mess
Hae_Soo_7134
Hae_Soo_7134Lv2

This is why I like to read novels which are well written such as My Billionaire Hero. Check it out and you will know what I'm talking about

AvidReader_1234:I am unable to read past 8 chapters. very bad grammar and gender mess
AvidReader_1234
AvidReader_1234Lv15

thanks for the recommendation. Will surely read it.

Hae_Soo_7134:This is why I like to read novels which are well written such as My Billionaire Hero. Check it out and you will know what I'm talking about
Hae_Soo_7134
Hae_Soo_7134Lv2

I'm sure you'll love it

AvidReader_1234:thanks for the recommendation. Will surely read it.
Jinhit_Ent
Jinhit_EntLv13

The translation is hilarious.... the 1st book in WN that i encounter with like more than 80% errors...

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