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2023-12-07 16:44

This is impossible to read. How in heaven's name is it at number 56?The idea is great, but honestly even for free (today) it is impossible to understand. You can never work out who is talking to who, or who they are referring to. Names and pronouns change continually. bah

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that's right omg!!!![img=angry]

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