okay. before the mc that i have no idea come, it's a masterpiece. i really don't understand why you need to change sasayuri into whoever lu chang or whateverhisnameis. since before you decide to put fgo elements into it, it's a perfect genshin impact fanfiction. you tried to mesh FGO and GI which failed miserably, in my opinion. It would be 100 times better if you keep sasayori as the mc and ei as the only lover because they obviously into each other. and the only thing stopping them from being a lover is ei naivety which sasayuri refuse to take advantage of. with that, you can focus the romance on him and ei alone. also, after lu came and become the mc, it's becoming more confusing to read. which somehow make me frustrated for some reason. In conclusion? Sasayuri should stay as sasayuri and FGO shouldn't be put in fanfic at all. but hey! you do you.
Liked it!
LIKEand the star rating is only for before you put FGO into this story.
