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Pythia
PythiaLv112yr
2022-07-20 17:58

I don't why but this story just feels weird to read, i can't really describe it. The writing quality is good as is the background but it just feels off for some reason.

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Venyon
VenyonLv4

Is it because Ei loves someone? (I still haven't read a chapter)

Pythia
PythiaLv11

No that bit is okay but it just feels weird. The author puts in a lot of elements that they don't understand. Like the Fate system and such.

Venyon:Is it because Ei loves someone? (I still haven't read a chapter)
Just_A_Bastard
Just_A_BastardAuthor

Understandable. I just hope you're not talking about the status thing, cuz I'm sure all of us at least encountered one version of it.

Pythia
PythiaLv11

I mean that was weird too. using Ex as a measurement for stats that don't actually have an Ex and stuff like that. Ex is only when an external factor effects the stat. For example, a strength buff that would turn A strength into above A or something similar. Or how Excalibur has it's seals so its ranked as an Ex Np.

Just_A_Bastard:Understandable. I just hope you're not talking about the status thing, cuz I'm sure all of us at least encountered one version of it.
Just_A_Bastard
Just_A_BastardAuthor

I remember answering a similar question around ch 28. So if it bothered you too much, do check it out. Thanks for the honest feedback! [img=recommend]

One2Turtle
One2TurtleLv14

What you mean with “Ei loves someone”?

Venyon:Is it because Ei loves someone? (I still haven't read a chapter)
Pythia
PythiaLv11

SPOILER!!!!!!! ................................. She likes some Tengu guy that in all honesty is an annoying and very shallow character... Thousand something years later she revives him but a different person (MC) is inside him instead of the OG person she loved, yeah.... it's very weird to read imo. Great writing though it's just my preference.

One2Turtle:What you mean with “Ei loves someone”?
Jheydi327
Jheydi327Lv13

Hmmmm.. Accupying others body is no for me.. And it's not my Cup of tea

Pythia:SPOILER!!!!!!! ................................. She likes some Tengu guy that in all honesty is an annoying and very shallow character... Thousand something years later she revives him but a different person (MC) is inside him instead of the OG person she loved, yeah.... it's very weird to read imo. Great writing though it's just my preference.
Layios
LayiosLv11

It's the same person with just more memory of his past life.

Pythia:SPOILER!!!!!!! ................................. She likes some Tengu guy that in all honesty is an annoying and very shallow character... Thousand something years later she revives him but a different person (MC) is inside him instead of the OG person she loved, yeah.... it's very weird to read imo. Great writing though it's just my preference.
Pythia
PythiaLv11

Uh. No it isn't. Did you not read the book? Or blissful ignorance?

Layios:It's the same person with just more memory of his past life.
Layios
LayiosLv11

I've read all chapter ^^" and If I remember well, the Tengu guy is the MC before he awakened his past memory, when he came back his clan even refer to him as Grand Ancestor (ex-Tengu leader). His whole persona also changed a bit because of that.

Pythia:Uh. No it isn't. Did you not read the book? Or blissful ignorance?
Layios
LayiosLv11

Author also said that the Tengu leader looked a bit alike to Jiang Zi Ya that's why he changed a bit the Tengu leader adding Jiang Zi Ya memory to make a whole new character instead of leaving it with his OG personality.

Pythia:Uh. No it isn't. Did you not read the book? Or blissful ignorance?
Pythia
PythiaLv11

You realise you just proved my point yeah?

Layios:Author also said that the Tengu leader looked a bit alike to Jiang Zi Ya that's why he changed a bit the Tengu leader adding Jiang Zi Ya memory to make a whole new character instead of leaving it with his OG personality.
Layios
LayiosLv11

Dude, like I said they are the same people -_- The Tengu leader we saw chapter 1 is different from OG one (author wrote him like that) and same when he was revived it's still the "modified" Tengu + Jiang Zi Ya memory.

Pythia:You realise you just proved my point yeah?
Pythia
PythiaLv11

Once more... you are proving my point.

Layios:Dude, like I said they are the same people -_- The Tengu leader we saw chapter 1 is different from OG one (author wrote him like that) and same when he was revived it's still the "modified" Tengu + Jiang Zi Ya memory.
Just_A_Bastard
Just_A_BastardAuthor

It's the same person. Resurrection means he died and was born again whether it will be on another world or another plane. At least that's how I see it. He just regained the memories of his past life, so the two personalities combined. The past guy is more of a chill dude but more capable. Hope this clarifies things. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Pythia
PythiaLv11

Same dude who after the memory wipe BS acts completely different....? Right.

Just_A_Bastard:It's the same person. Resurrection means he died and was born again whether it will be on another world or another plane. At least that's how I see it. He just regained the memories of his past life, so the two personalities combined. The past guy is more of a chill dude but more capable. Hope this clarifies things. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
someRandomMob
someRandomMobLv4

so she revive someone, bot her sister ? lol i guess this is not Ei then. Imma dodge this then.

Pythia:SPOILER!!!!!!! ................................. She likes some Tengu guy that in all honesty is an annoying and very shallow character... Thousand something years later she revives him but a different person (MC) is inside him instead of the OG person she loved, yeah.... it's very weird to read imo. Great writing though it's just my preference.
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Layios
LayiosLv11

After reading all available chapter so far, I can say that this FF isn't bad nor good. This is my second big reading of genshin FF ( first is journey through teyvat ). Tbh, VOL 0 or the so-called prolog was tbh very annoying to read and even a waste of time (to me), I can just recall that MC got killed during a big event - > he got along well with girls that's all. Personality wise, MC is unlikable (to me), story is heavily focused on comedy because of it's protagonists and with his light joke (he think it is), for a ex-sage/more than thousands y-old man being so childish is in a way impressive but also annoying to say the least. He is also pretty much sexual harassing most female character ( these so-called girls doesn't rly mind 'cause of protagonists-halo ). Anyways, as you can see I have a very bad opinion of this story MC, not that I'm asking for y'all to be like him, you can all try to read it then you'll understand. One bad point too is, too much character and they're mostly bland with just some very important characters that seems humanlike (a bit?). The plot seems to be a slice of life adding a kindgom building? Idk, not rly sure bout it, it's rly too hard to understand what's the end goal of all this. Another point that I wanted to talk about is, his fate system/gold finger (idk if there is) or smthg like that seemed to be pretty non-existent, it's mentioned only a few times in hundred of chapter. Anyways that's the end of my rambling bout this novel, If you have plenty of time to waste then go on, if not just put away to read it later.

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