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_The_Fool_
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2022-03-25 04:58

To be honest the story is great so far and I’m hooked. Chapter 55. But I have a question for the author, you said this was a rewriting of another story, but I want to know will this one follow the same story line as before or will you make changes??

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_The_Fool_
_The_Fool_Lv14

I ask this because I haven’t read the original novel to this but I’ve seen comments and reviews online and they mentioned how he practically hands one of the heroines to his best friend because he likes her. Now this puts me off a little because I’m of the opinion that “all good things should be kept in the family”

Celestial_Drake
Celestial_DrakeLv14

Where did you see/read that?

_The_Fool_:I ask this because I haven’t read the original novel to this but I’ve seen comments and reviews online and they mentioned how he practically hands one of the heroines to his best friend because he likes her. Now this puts me off a little because I’m of the opinion that “all good things should be kept in the family”
Azarq
AzarqLv14

I have only read the chapters here too but from what you are saying it points to Eli and Delia probably?

Lockonstrat
LockonstratLv15

Dyon never would " hand " a woman to another man. First, he would help his friend conquer the heart of their beloved Second, if he and a woman both love each other, no one can separate them

_The_Fool_:I ask this because I haven’t read the original novel to this but I’ve seen comments and reviews online and they mentioned how he practically hands one of the heroines to his best friend because he likes her. Now this puts me off a little because I’m of the opinion that “all good things should be kept in the family”
Himanshu_Choudhary_0437
Himanshu_Choudhary_0437Lv3

actually i have read it and no this does not happen what happens is he thinks of that girl as his sister as his lover think of that girl as her sister in the start when he is not in the relationship he flirts with her little but so does he with most of the girls in the start of the novel but again i have not read the complete novel so i can,t say about the later half.

_The_Fool_:I ask this because I haven’t read the original novel to this but I’ve seen comments and reviews online and they mentioned how he practically hands one of the heroines to his best friend because he likes her. Now this puts me off a little because I’m of the opinion that “all good things should be kept in the family”
_The_Fool_
_The_Fool_Lv14

Well like I mentioned previously lol, I’m just of the opinion that all good things should be kept in the family. Lool he shouldn’t let go of treasures that dropped by near him

Himanshu_Choudhary_0437:actually i have read it and no this does not happen what happens is he thinks of that girl as his sister as his lover think of that girl as her sister in the start when he is not in the relationship he flirts with her little but so does he with most of the girls in the start of the novel but again i have not read the complete novel so i can,t say about the later half.
yamete_kudasai
yamete_kudasaiLv4

urhgg . .. . man finally someone understand my frustration .. .it's the reason why I couldn't continue further .. ... I liked delia and at first she was clearly a love interest and she was also interested in him but author literally forced her to forget about the emotional connection mc made with her and the way she was waiting for him at the ceremony .. .. .. .. .

_The_Fool_:Well like I mentioned previously lol, I’m just of the opinion that all good things should be kept in the family. Lool he shouldn’t let go of treasures that dropped by near him
DoubleFacedManX_69
DoubleFacedManX_69Lv11

so, what's the status between MC and Delia now? any sign of love development ?

yamete_kudasai:urhgg . .. . man finally someone understand my frustration .. .it's the reason why I couldn't continue further .. ... I liked delia and at first she was clearly a love interest and she was also interested in him but author literally forced her to forget about the emotional connection mc made with her and the way she was waiting for him at the ceremony .. .. .. .. .
yamete_kudasai
yamete_kudasaiLv4

nah ... he leaves her for his wimp friend. if you are keen observer you will also be disappointed cuz she was hot,,and tanned muscular babe .

DoubleFacedManX_69:so, what's the status between MC and Delia now? any sign of love development ?
countzero
countzeroLv15

While I occasionally like some pokemon hunter MC's, you gotta respect those few that try to limit their harem in the single digits 😁😁😁

yamete_kudasai:urhgg . .. . man finally someone understand my frustration .. .it's the reason why I couldn't continue further .. ... I liked delia and at first she was clearly a love interest and she was also interested in him but author literally forced her to forget about the emotional connection mc made with her and the way she was waiting for him at the ceremony .. .. .. .. .
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