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Review Detail of StarInTheNight in Honkai Impact: Invictus.

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StarInTheNight
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First if he will have relationship with Raiden mei then it will make him love this researcher mei , if u make her(researcher mei) still live and see her friends love with someone look alike herself then it will make them awkward , or if kevil see it them he will think that he is ntr his best friend or he will think that you want to ntr him. You make this complicated with kavin and mei relationship , you should remember this is fanfic. Timeline or something should go to sewer even if there's something important that will happen you should make a history correction or make an oc to replace mei not make thing complicated like this ntr stuff , and the relationship between mei and Kevin in this novel look like forced relationship. First mc is the one that make mei live bright and you just insert kevil like a tumor and this make this novel look ntr. GL with this novel, this novel is not for me , wasting my time , i thing stuff like this will happen many times in the future and you will say "this relationship is important for the future" so goodbye ...

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Honkai Impact: Invictus.

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