That's why I hate this kind of novel -_- , wasting time and throwing all the good things cause it's useless if he didn't get anything and done something in the past , I don't understand what kind of brain circuit u did to make him born in the past just to get humiliation and got nerf just for your novel to be hated and making this novel longer ? Why making fanfic if u give him imaginary enemy it's better if this is crossover than making enemy that's more powerful than him and troll your friends. But GL with this trash novel

It's not because ni lie didn't want to give it to everyone but he left it at library (only at small world tech) and at the start he can't give it to everyone cause they're many spy and he can't control them cause he will leave to upper realm ...

First if he will have relationship with Raiden mei then it will make him love this researcher mei , if u make her(researcher mei) still live and see her friends love with someone look alike herself then it will make them awkward , or if kevil see it them he will think that he is ntr his best friend or he will think that you want to ntr him. You make this complicated with kavin and mei relationship , you should remember this is fanfic. Timeline or something should go to sewer even if there's something important that will happen you should make a history correction or make an oc to replace mei not make thing complicated like this ntr stuff , and the relationship between mei and Kevin in this novel look like forced relationship. First mc is the one that make mei live bright and you just insert kevil like a tumor and this make this novel look ntr. GL with this novel, this novel is not for me , wasting my time , i thing stuff like this will happen many times in the future and you will say "this relationship is important for the future" so goodbye ...

Timeline is nothing if this is fanfic -_- , you just have to make a history correction. If all what you make in history got nothing then why make this novel at this period ...

Still error ...

Who ?

Well he translate it so it's ok

Yes i know right there's mtl of this novel

Nonsese ... God King fuses with mortal ? Is this joke to you 🤣 ...

Chinese young master troops everywhere and dd fanfic without spirit and spirit ring is funny wkwkwk ... And this MC character is weird , every place he visited have Chinese troops

Why reincarnated in douluo dalu if he can't have spirit ring -_- , it's better if he reincarn in btth than dd lol , gl with your story ... U making all the people in the dd like Chinese young master and all his distruss for people is weird

Lol that's when he is GOD level already his brain can do it and he can see magic at the level of miracle , now u making this novel ridiculouse and making his wife slut -_- i don't know if u like rudeus but it's better if he reincarnated as redeus than being his brother ... U don't know how to different wat MC and his twin can do and the bottom line a reader want to see like , wat the fk di u want your wife to be seen naked to other ??? Even if it's your brother it's disgusting in a novel

Too short lol -_- , wat kind of novel is this 😅 GL man ...

Yes wkwkwk , it's better to make her a brocon , but this story look stupid and i think the MC will become babysitter for them

Yah bener sih tapi fanfiction tanpa mengganti alur ceritanya berarti author nya gk memiliki ide buat cerita nya , alurnya cuma ulang" dgn dia menjadi support dan "senyum sinis 😂"

Yah terserahlah tapi sikapnya yg selalu tersenyum sinis setiap bertemu orang itu lucu wkwkwk dan stiap kali dia senyum gitu tuh musuh gak pernah menanggap itu menakutkan wkwkwk jadi itu kek simbolnya MC gitu 😂 Tapi dirinya sama dgn gilgamesh? Lol wkwkwkw , Beda jauh lah bang , klo ada barang bagus gilgamesh pasti ambil semua yg bagus tpi nih MC ksih semua barang bagus ke Yuhao (kesayangan MC 😂) nih author tamba tu pedang" aneh sepaya nih MC bisa beli sesuatu dan gk ambil barang bagus nya Yuhao jadi kelihatan menjijikan nih MC , ke DD tapi pake pedang aneh kenapa gak ke dunia lain LOL

this story' is confusing for somone that never read DD , their relationship is weird and did they think Ning rongrong Will love Oscar with her have a monster brother lol , and this story' need our imagination to picture their monologue and fighting scene .All what happen in this story is like a flash .

Wkwkwk i don't understand wat happened in there , the author think we all know about DD lol , the fight scene look like sht to me

Heran gw karena author nya milih DD2 tpi gk ada yg dia buat cuma akting misterius mulu dan cuma ngulang" nih sikap nih MC setiap kali ketumu orang senyum sinis wkwkwk , setiap kali baca itu gw rasa ketawa dan nih author selalu nunjukin tuh Yuhao kalo nih 1 protagonis lalu nih MC cuka aktor support , nih author lebe baik bikin nih MC gay

Lol then Ning Ronrong will have purple ring for the first ring