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ZoneTail
ZoneTailLv53yr
2022-02-24 13:22

▪︎ Writing Quality.............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎ Story Development......☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎ Character Design.........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎ Updating Stability........☆☆☆☆☆ - not really 5star, but for the sake of 5 stars, I will give 5 stars ▪︎ World Background.......☆☆☆☆☆ - finally a challenge. welldone.

Harbingers of Change

DukeCheburek
4.7
239 Chs

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The_Anonymous_User
The_Anonymous_UserLv4

is it harem author?

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ZoneTail
ZoneTailLv5

nope. and I'm not an author(sadly)

The_Anonymous_User:is it harem author?
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Nandak
NandakLv1

LOL

ZoneTail:nope. and I'm not an author(sadly)
2yr
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nicholas8293
nicholas8293Lv1

it is.

The_Anonymous_User:is it harem author?
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CloudSmoke
CloudSmokeLv5

Does Ainz lose his skeleton body?

nicholas8293:it is.
1yr
CloudSmoke
CloudSmokeLv5

Thanks dude good looking out. 🙂

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nicholas8293
nicholas8293Lv1

yes, albedo, shion, and shalltear.

The_Anonymous_User:is it harem author?
1yr
KuNaLsAmA
KuNaLsAmALv4

Dude! thanks for this comment. Now I know Ainz sama will get that booty

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nicholas8293
nicholas8293Lv1

Yeah, basically lost all of my interest in this dogs*it, it was my last straw, and he broke it, I was hoping since his last novel wasn't a harem, that he wouldn't do one this time, but he did, edgy seems to be the one mostly carrying the fanfics they collab in.

CloudSmoke:Thanks dude good looking out. 🙂
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ChaosLegion555
ChaosLegion555Lv13

Honestly I don't see what issue you are going on about with the whole harem aspect there aren't explicit other than implied or signs of affection like kissing on the check and even that's HEAVILY dispersed through the book. The harem aspect is a tamer version of the OS and just shows, and adds to, Momongas character that he does have feelings and cares for people and is not fully suppressed emotionally.

nicholas8293:Yeah, basically lost all of my interest in this dogs*it, it was my last straw, and he broke it, I was hoping since his last novel wasn't a harem, that he wouldn't do one this time, but he did, edgy seems to be the one mostly carrying the fanfics they collab in.
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nicholas8293
nicholas8293Lv1

because it wasn't needed, the author has made several that didn't have harems and they were fine.

ChaosLegion555:Honestly I don't see what issue you are going on about with the whole harem aspect there aren't explicit other than implied or signs of affection like kissing on the check and even that's HEAVILY dispersed through the book. The harem aspect is a tamer version of the OS and just shows, and adds to, Momongas character that he does have feelings and cares for people and is not fully suppressed emotionally.
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nicholas8293
nicholas8293Lv1

also he kinda just adds them in randomly, tag or not.

ChaosLegion555:Honestly I don't see what issue you are going on about with the whole harem aspect there aren't explicit other than implied or signs of affection like kissing on the check and even that's HEAVILY dispersed through the book. The harem aspect is a tamer version of the OS and just shows, and adds to, Momongas character that he does have feelings and cares for people and is not fully suppressed emotionally.
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FYDemonVenerable
FYDemonVenerableLv3

till now this fanfiction is really satisfactory and above this is overlord. ... thank you author for this amazing fanfiction. ... .. .. ...

3yr

AEEK
AEEKLv4

I started reading this work now, and i can proudly say this project has lots of potential. I like character development + Interegated into world. Tensura + Overlord = Fantastic🤘😝🤘 Keep up the good work, Thank you.

2yr
sari_saarinen
sari_saarinenLv3

bad other ppl gets transported whit him to other world would have been good if only momonga and nazarick but no ....................................................

2yr
H75_N
H75_NLv4

. . . . . . . . I don't have words to describe how much of a fairy tale it is. Unique skill predator, 2 peoples have it and then our overlord why is his character so meak in this. I can't comprehend it with my small brain. Buko's personality is to disgusting for my own preference. Shaltiar is not calling him My lord anymore. He is so weak that his bones gets crushed when someone holds his hands and no sorry whatsoever even after that. OG rimuru had more op cheats than momonga in the series. Predator was main skill of rimuru which allowed him to grow till how strong he is. And here every slime has one they say. Donno what to feel. it feels like buku is the main protagonist sometime, and momonga is a supporting character. Buku has predator but doesn't want to use it she is not asking permission from momonga and doing things on her own accord. If you have read original over lord novel this will seem as an children's book to you. Anyway it is my own opinion, if author wants to remove it it's his own opinion, if you want to ignore it it's your own opinion.

1yr
DogLickerGods
DogLickerGodsLv11

I read Overlord novels over 7 volumes. And well, after I read this fanfic, I find it unfortunate that the MC is the Overlord MC himself and not a transmigrator who knows the plot or something. It's not that I don't like Ainz, it's just meh. It's boring, I don't like this kind of MC.

1yr
Oji_san_ecchi
Oji_san_ecchiLv4

To be honest, from the start it was very uninteresting, the proof, I think, is that someone else who went to the world of isekai, you know, is actually the protagonist of the overlord story itself, it would be nice if the mC was someone else with the ability of dungeon votive + his subordinates who went to another world , so that mc can surprise his opponent who doesn't know about some of the items from the Yggdrasil game itself, well before that I'm sorry author, I really don't like this novel, it's just like, like you love Mc overlord's own shoes instead of making your own story, this is like the original overlord story template but in another anime world, plus the tensura mc anime is removed again,. then how can you make an interesting story? while you yourself have eliminated some of the good plots in that world?.. it would be nice if you used your brain before writing,.. grade 04 for this novel, thank you

1yr
lord_couchpotato
lord_couchpotatoLv3

This is a genuine 5 star novel, One of the best webnovel fanfic section can offer each interaction is soo well done that it does not even feel like you are reading a fanfic.

2yr
Bakkoy
BakkoyLv4

one of the good fanfic, there is an enemy that is equal or can be considered a threat to nazarick. which made Momonga have to be extra careful than the original, and made me wonder if Nazarick could still be in control of the whole situation. Google Translate

2yr
firat_Vural
firat_VuralLv13

I’ve read this in ff up until 168 and i can confidently say it is one of the best fanfic ever written. It’s world building and deviation from canon are all done great.

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